Surviving on an Oxygen-Starved Alien Planet, and This Counts as National Destiny?

The first 20 chapters had too many side quests, the pace was too slow, and there was too much introduction; I even considered abandoning them. Fortunately, the author realized the problem and corrected it later.

It has its pros and cons. After all, fewer people write and read Oxygen Not Included. Initially, the pacing was too slow, and there were issues with plot handling and perspective distribution. Giving too much time to extras in the early stages made it seem like a pseudo-ensemble piece. These were later revised, but the understanding of the core gameplay of Oxygen Not Included was somewhat lacking.

It looks like there aren't many people, but actually all the people who play Oxygen Not Included are here! 😏👍

It's alright, but the early stages were too slow. The writing generally revolves around the main character; if you want to write about other supporting characters, you have to establish the main character first.

I personally think it's alright, but I was stunned when I saw the weight of the dropped block – 1000 kg! 🤦🤦 It's so hard to guess who could pick it up! 🤦🤦

I bought all the Oxygen Not Included DLCs, but I keep crashing and restarting because I'm clumsy. I hope this book can teach me how.

It's very interesting to write. I hope the author can write it to 1 million words! 😳😳😳

Not bad, this progress should be a bit more word-for-word than the completed book.

It looks nice, but there are some things I don't quite understand.

There aren't many track books available, so I'll do my part.