Surviving on an Oxygen-Starved Alien Planet, and This Counts as National Destiny?

There are too many branches in the first 20 chapters, the progress is too slow, and there are too many introductions. I wanted to give up at one point. Fortunately, the author realized the problem and corrected it later.

There are disadvantages as well as advantages. After all, there are few people writing about Hypoxia, and there are also few people reading it. First of all, the slow pacing and plot processing problems in the early stage, as well as the distribution of perspectives. Giving passers-by too much time in the early stage resulted in it looking like a pseudo-group portrait. There have been modifications later, but the understanding of the hypoxia game itself is a little less. For example, it is stated that after building coal to generate electricity, you should make smart batteries, prepare circuits, and temperature. Instead, I did not prepare for a natural gas mission, which disrupted some layouts. Now I have only perfected food, simple toilet cycles, and exploration. Of course, the biggest problem is caused by too few updates.

It seems that there are only a few people, but in fact all the people who play hypoxia are here [laughing evilly] [like]

It's okay, but the early progress is too slow. Writing usually revolves around the protagonist. If you want to write about other supporting characters, you have to arrange the protagonist first and then write.

Personally, I think it's okay, but I was stunned when I saw the weight of the blocks that fell during the excavation. It's 1,000 kilograms [cover face] [cover face]. It's hard to guess who picked it up [cover face] [cover face]

I bought all the DLC for Hypoxia, but my hand always crashes and restarts. I hope this book can teach me.

It is very interesting to write. I hope the author can write it to 1 million words [shy][shy][shy]

Not bad, this progress should be a little more than the number of words in the finished book

It looks good, but there are some things I don't quite understand.

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