Starships: Evolving from a Shuttlecraft

It's very comfortable to see this. The only thing that feels awkward is that sometimes the twists and turns are too dense, and then you don't feel that way when you relax. Overall, it's okay. The writing still needs to be improved. Basically, there are no major problems. The main thing is It's brainless. If you have some brains, it won't work if you connect it in series. We still hope to have more battles, and then add some more twists and turns, more dense, to give readers a mental pressure, and then a short period of relaxation. There are also some foreshadowings. Take a look at our Heroine, hey, I don't know why this plot reminds me of "Star Travels". Mainly because I feel that the ending of this plot is not easy. Anyway, I still hope it won't end badly, but it feels too smooth. But after all, this is a cool novel and it has twists and turns, so I still hope that the twists and turns can be bigger. Click, go around a little more, anyway, the brainless author can just imagine it directly. Just a little more twists and turns, so that I feel that their success is hard-won. I don't know why it still feels too smooth, but after all, this is a cool article, which makes me very entangled. I hope the author will continue to write, come on! [Like][Like][Like]

Well, it looks good, it looks good, but it's too naive, but it's harmless, and it's still slow in development.

Very nice looking, I really like this upgrade. I hope the author will continue to work hard! ! [Praise]

It's super cool and mindless to watch. Weapons can be seen with your mind

Worth a look, ok

Not bad, interesting.

Good looking

Not bad. You can 👌 take a look

The opening plot is gripping

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