My Master Doesn't Look Like a Big Shot at All

Overall, it's good, but there are some small aspects that are a little bit annoying to me personally, but I can barely accept it. The first point is that the heroine was still very capable during her first apprenticeship, but she lost it after going to other star regions to collect a mount. She turned into a 12-year-old naughty child at the age of 22. And for some reason, the heroine likes to rob families and homes. Did I miss some settings? A person who casually gives out holy weapons and holy-level skills likes to rob some small sect resources. Mosquito legs also feel like meat. This kind of robbery is okay once or twice, but if there are too many similar plots, it will be a bit tired and the shaping is a bit unpleasant. I feel that it is not as good as the one created by the big apprentice. Secondly, the personal perception of accepting a disciple as Xiao Shi is a poisonous point. In the first few chapters of the second disciple, Zhe Tian is still chasing me, and the second disciple is also a time traveler. The most important point is the CP aspect. When writing the character Xiao... When she first saw it, the heroine thought he was very handsome and was stunned. Then she saw the male partner's fruit and body when he transformed back into a human body outside the country. The man actually asked if it looked good, and the heroine replied that it looked good. Man, I went straight to the introduction to see if I had made a mistake. There was no CP, but the next few chapters were cut at the speed of light. The male partner's family came together to make trouble and confirmed that the relationship was based on no interest. A little suggestion, a single arrow for the heroine is fine, but I feel like I need to write a little more distance from the heroine. I agree to whatever someone invites me to do, and I feel like something is going to happen. Otherwise, I really feel like I'm watching the hero pop up. I've read 60 chapters and it's all about these small subjective issues. I don't know what will happen next. I also hope that the next few hundred chapters can get some extra points. Do any book friends who have read it say how it is? There are very few invincible books that I can read, buddy. . .

The heroine is so powerful, she is invincible but not merciless, she is as kind as a saint, she is kind to her apprentices but she is also a cheat, haha, the heroine is the safest when there is danger, and the most dangerous when there is no danger

It's so good. It's the first time I've seen such a domineering and invincible female protagonist. I used to prefer cold female protagonists when reading novels. Now this female protagonist is very funny and pretty, and the female protagonist is also super strong. I saw the heroine's apprentice going through the tribulation, and the heroine called Ban Tiandao. It made my blood boil. It was so cool. I've only seen it on male channels before. It's my first time to watch a strong female protagonist, and there's nothing romantic about it. I highly recommend it.

Yes, reading more will help your IQ deteriorate.

It's a bit bloody, but it's not Holy Mother. Maybe it's because I've been reading it for a long time. When I saw the heroine going on a killing spree, I suddenly felt a little unaccustomed to it. If nothing else, the author's writing style is really good and she created a different heroine. Not to mention the content, the writing style is perfect. Come on, update it. When it's finished, I'll read it from the beginning.

Suddenly I realized that the nine disciples you set up as the author are not like your names. Nine disciples are equal to nine cats!

Although the protagonist is a bit too naive in the early stage, it is very enjoyable to watch in the later stage. Because he comes from Blue Star, it is normal to be naive. The heroine's thinking continues to grow and mature. Overall, it looks good.

The overall feeling is pretty good. It is one of the most thoughtful invincible novels I have read in this period (maybe because I have read too many formulaic invincible novels recently). I just feel that the author wants to go big but is afraid that the writing will collapse. There is no foreshadowing and recycling type of highlights in the follow-up, which may cause some people to feel that it is not interesting after reading it.

I have a feeling that the ending will be a big hit

It looks good, it looks good, it's not enough, please update (ง ˙o˙)ว