Super God, I'm Really Not a Heavenly Scum!

It's a very good supernatural novel, but I don't know how to write Mo Yun's emotional line. After all, he has always had no desires and desires [face covering] I wish I had put away my short skirt, from the three kings to the heart of the sun... [Laughing evilly]

I'd like to give it a five-star support. The writing is mediocre but I can read it. There are a lot of noises, but it's innocuous. The heroes and the humanities are pretty good. Just don't have any bloody or stupid plots in the back. It can be a bit noisy, but if it's too much, it will be disgusting. The chapters are a bit too few. The author should hurry up and update them. Of course, if you want to achieve good results, you have to write about it. Just don't have any crazy plots in the back about the collapse of combat power or the enemy coming from the sky. As long as the author's writing is reasonable and interesting, it will be good. The most important thing is that I don't see anything at the moment. Although I personally don't like to read stallion books, but if you want to improve the performance of this book, I personally suggest that you can put the main plot second. For now, write the emotional line first, and write a fuller relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist of "These". You can learn from fantasy novels and add some reasonable events. Don't be too domineering and fall in love with the protagonist after just one glance and his experience. After reading so many super god fanfics, to be honest, the results will depend on the author's imagination. As long as it is consistent with the worldview and is reasonable and unbiased, I will continue to support it. [OK] It's not too much. The author can do it five times a day, right? [Facepalm]

There are a lot of foreshadowings in this article. Any unreasonable things you see are actually foreshadowing, which will lead to the author's original plot later. The writing is very good. The author is good at writing female emotional expressions. It needs to be read slowly.

The writing style of this novel is very good, but the foreshadowing at the beginning may be a bit too much. Some people may not understand it, but it should not be limited to this. If everyone has different tastes, if you don't like it, just quit. And when I read novels and read this kind of fanfic, I mean that I can't ruin it. When I read it in the early stage, the characters were all online. The writing style of the novel is very good, but the foreshadowing at the beginning is all online. I may have bought a lot of pens, and some people may not like it, but it's not too much. It shouldn't be just that much. If everyone's tastes are different, if you don't like it, just quit. And personally, when I read novels and read this kind of fanfic, I just say that it can't be broken. When I read this in the early stage, the characters were all online. Kesha is the kind of brave, independent, independent, and a bit gentle. In the later stages of the queen's life, she became the male protagonist's wife and also had a feminine attitude, but I felt that the change was a bit too fast, even though Angel is a love brain. But it's a change, and it feels a bit too sudden. Although I'm a bit of a love brain, I still have to have my own thoughts. Although it's a bit congested here to open the harem, it's still possible. In addition, the author's word count for a chapter is 4,000 to 3,000. Well, if one page is in Tomato, 2,000 to 3,000 is enough. If the plot is incomplete, another 4,000 to 3,000 is also okay. Great support, author.

Very nice! Although the protagonist is still useless after 20,000 years, but! This is foreshadowed! So, don't run away and read on! If I don't like it, I'll leave first.

It's a pretty good novel, I think. I've only read two fanfics of Heroes of the Company, and this one is of good quality. Although the author expressed early on that he did not want to write the book because it would not be profitable, the quality did not drop at all later on. At first I thought it was a harem story, but in the end it was a harem story with Kaisha, Yan, Liang Bing, Hexi and Qilin. I was originally disgusted with taking Liang Bing in, after all, she killed many innocent people, but after thinking about it, I felt relieved that the more brutal male protagonists were all extinct galaxies [face covering] Most of the content is self-created, and a small part of the original work. The male protagonist is an angel. Most of the content must be about angels, so the whole book does not contain any content about Xiongbinglian.

The writing is quite good, without any moisture, and it always follows the main line. But if possible, it would be best to also follow the branch lines of Liang Bing and Qiangwei. In addition, it is best not to touch Yan's emotional line, although the original love triangle is quite uncomfortable. But if hanging on Mo Yun turns into a naughty love, it will be even more uncomfortable. So it's best to go back to Ge Xiaolun. Unexpectedly, really, according to the introduction, the male protagonist still took the harem line in the end. Although it was not to my liking, I would not read further. But the rating will not change, because the writing is really good.

It looks quite interesting. The protagonist is an ascetic type, but has a strong sense of stud. The whole story shows that the protagonist is not interested in women, and there is no flirting content. However, most of the named angels are interested in the protagonist. I am not sure about Morgana, but Kesha, Hexi and Yan also like the protagonist. Qilin also likes the protagonist on Earth. Chapter 46 Kesha strongly recommends Mo Yun

The characters in Super God are really well written, and the writing is not bad. Don't pay attention to those who say it's too powerful to fight. I stood up without even looking at it.

I approved of this book, and my driving skills are okay [laughing evilly] The author must insist, I'm afraid Tomato won't have the rights Then he lost inexplicably. If he loses again, he must support him.