Cave Survival: Did the Clay Figure I Made Come to Life?

"Little Head Daddy" (given four stars because I'm just afraid of sinking) [face covering]

Very novel subject matter, strong support [send heart]

Byd was very happy to see it, but suddenly he brought his girl here, but he couldn't accept this, and it was a poisonous point. I can't blame the author, I can only blame myself. I can't give a negative review, give it four stars, and run away. If you can't watch the inexplicable girl, you can avoid it, you're welcome [laughing]

It's very interesting. It's not like other survival novels like Lone Wolf. I just feel that the protagonist is a bit naive and love-minded.

There are bad points, and there are also advantages, but it is getting better and better in the future. I hope that the previous problems will not appear again in the future. For example, the protagonist should not be unable to walk when he sees a beautiful woman and become a licking dog. There are upgrade options and do not choose garbage options. In addition, the subject matter is also good. I hope the author will not be a eunuch. Come on, I hope it will get better and better in the future. Finally, I wish everyone a happy new year.

I felt pretty good after reading twenty or thirty chapters. Regarding the heroine issue in the introduction, I would like to express my opinion: this book is the author's own, and the author should consider more about his own writing rhythm. As for the good opinions of readers, of course you should adopt them (the prerequisite is that they are good suggestions and not trolls, and trolls won't give you gold coins, right?)

It's better for a lone wolf to slowly explore things like puppet writing, but it would be boring to lead a team later.

I've identified it as a novice's article, but the writing is okay.

Cave survival, the setting is eye-catching and the concept is unique! But the early plot may not be compact or exciting enough to catch your eye. There are "poisonous points" in some plots. The protagonist is not decisive enough in some dealings. He feels that his character is flawed. He is too naive and has a love brain. He can't walk when he sees a beautiful woman. These settings are not well thought out. The development direction does not meet expectations, and I don't quite agree with the plot development of the protagonist and the team. In short, the subject matter is good, but it needs to continue to be revised to strive to become a hit work. 🙏

Overall it's pretty good. The score shouldn't be so low. It's just that sometimes the protagonist is prone to wandering and letting some enemies and items run away (for example, the honest Minotaur box fell near his feet, and he actually watched someone pick it up and open it, letting the Minotaur use it and run away without stopping him).