The Soft and Beautiful Girl Becomes a Favorite in the Eerie World

Dear Li Hua: Hello! By the time you read this review, I will have become a mature author. I think you should be happy about this, because the girl who used to code for many late nights and submit articles to many websites but was rejected again and again has now become a young author who is liked and praised. Please bless me. I want to tell you some good news. While writing this short story, I learned how to transition scenes, how to smoothly connect the characters' actions and dialogues, and how to write the character's own personality. But I have to say that I still have some unresolved problems. I had a big problem with the setting of supporting characters and did not play out the way this theme should be. Do you also regret this? It's okay, I've learned my lesson and will continue to improve. My comment section is very interesting. I have learned a lot in it, and there are many things I didn't know about, all from the suggestions given to me by readers. I sometimes feel sad because a young reader has posted a long paragraph expressing his anger towards that character. I feel very sorry because my mistake has hurt their emotions. There are a lot of cute emoticons in the comment area. You like them too, right? I have collected a lot. I will send them to you next time we chat. Li Hua, I have many stories in my mind that I want to share with you, and I have been working hard on this. I gave this little story a pretty good rating, four stars. It's snowing heavily tonight, if only that was money. Hope to meet you soon. Your most loyal friend, half pot

It's quite good to watch, but there are a lot of scenes in Wen Ning'an's plot at the beginning. If you skip it, you'd be afraid of missing out on the wonderful cooking. The heroine is constantly being controlled, which makes me feel particularly uncomfortable. If you don't mind, you can still watch it. I re-read the comment section, and I was really touched by the author's sincerity. Every comment has a reply, and the readers' opinions are listened to. I want to say that the writing is really beautiful, except for the characterization of the supporting characters. There are some shortcomings, but these are not achieved overnight. I believe that the writing will get better and better [Sending Hearts]

Boss, I want to follow you forever! ! ! The following is demining: 1. In the novel, there will be a person who steals the limelight from the heroine (there are not many scenes, and he is written to death in the third world-Yancheng), and the subsequent ending of that person is not physical and mental abuse, but a conscience discovery, and discovers the secret that the heroine is not the original heroine, and uses his own life to help the heroine (this preference depends on the individual, I am a female protagonist, I think it is okay, I can watch it) 2. The heroine will be a bit stupid, and you can even see the clear stupidity at the beginning (). This may be a minefield for some babies, but the author's writing style is also improving, and it will be much better later. However, because it is a soft beauty theme, you need to grasp a certain degree. If you want to see a strong and scheming heroine, you can avoid it 3. There is someone outside (snake). If you don't like this, you can skip the disaster. 4. Although it is a live broadcast, there are relatively few barrage parts. There is no way to watch the barrage in the following worlds. The worlds behind the assistant (system - Wuyan) have not followed up (the author has written reasons here). Those who want to watch the barrage interact with the assistant can choose as appropriate. 5. Love at first sight is an old joke, it's like getting married right away after just one glance. If you want to see the long-lasting love, you can avoid lightning. ⚡️Old⚡️big⚡️you⚡️write⚡️⚡️good⚡️good⚡️ah⚡️ But it's a pity that Wuyan can't follow him. By the way, does Wuyan's identity have anything to do with the subsequent plot? I feel that this horror game is not simple🤔There is also the main system And, no! Want! Exist! Word! Affection! Knock! Rotten! The relationship between Huang Mao and Xiao Luo is related to the subsequent plot, so don't talk about romance here (horror) Actually, I also want that Bible (cross out) Boss, I'll give you 520 words😋💪

Zundu looks great. I will check it out as soon as it is updated. The author needs to pay attention to rest. I like the heroine very much. She is so delicate and soft [adoration] [adoration] I just picked up this book today. I read it in one go and added it to my bookshelf. Cheers to the author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

After reading the first copy, in general, the author's writing style is very delicate. The heroine is a kind of stupid beauty who is delicate and weak. She is taken advantage of by White Lotus and some people in the team. The chapters I have read so far are a bit cowardly and don't poke my xp. I hope I can understand the true face of those people and be smarter. But those barrages are very interesting and interesting [Chigua] This is my first time writing a book review, so I may be a little embarrassed. [Salute]

I'm a person who prefers to leave a few chapters and love to write. I never thought that I would finish reading this novel in one go. Oh my God, it's so beautiful [shy][shy][shy][shy][shy] Also, I see some comments are so unfriendly because they are stressed. I just don't understand what the author said. I'm so stupid [laughing awkwardly][laughing awkwardly]

It's so beautiful~ Soft and beautiful, the plot of the copy is also great, please give it a boost, the author~

Invincible is so good-looking, the heroine is sometimes clumsy, sometimes cute and lovable, and she doesn't let up at all at critical moments. The characters are described and portrayed in detail. I really like watching it. Big support for the author! [Love][love][love]

New readers must read on. It feels so ordinary at first, but the further you read, the better it gets! ! The heroine is constantly improving and getting stronger. Especially the life background of Wan Qiwang (Mo Hope) written in the back, the large writing style really surprised me! [Adoration][Adoration]

Although this is the book I have read in this genre that I want to read the most. The heroine is cute and charming throughout the whole process. Apart from anything else, I give it full marks. The story is compact and I basically read it in one sitting. I hope the author will continue to work hard. In some books, I found that the heroine changed and the story was not that exciting after reading it. I also like the type of male protagonist designed by the author👅