After I Gave Up Winning Him Over, My Deranged Disciple Suddenly Turned Yandere

I think it's okay. I've finished reading it, both the front and the middle. This novel was written by the female protagonist. She traveled through her own novel. She feels that everything in the novel is real, with flesh-and-blood people. She changed other people's endings, and there will be another way to force correction. I feel that the male protagonist's previous life was quite miserable. After the male protagonist was reborn and came back, the female protagonist also slowed down. I slowly warmed up to the male protagonist, protected him, defended him, and then got together, but I felt that the ending was not what I wanted. The female protagonist returned to modern times, and the male protagonist gave up everything in the world of immortality for her and came to the place where the modern female protagonist is. If the ending is that the female protagonist stays in the world of immortality, gets together with the male protagonist, and then travels around the world, I think this would be good.

The main body is good, but the writing style could be more concise, the narrative... Well, it's a bit slow and simple, and the connection could be smoother. Of course, I'm just suggesting, if it doesn't work I'll just delete the comment. ^_^

The author asks for an update. I hope Duoduo will abuse the male protagonist [shy][shy][shy]

It's so beautiful. I just want to know if it's he. [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

After reading it, I want to say this novel, let me read it. I picked a person like this and read it word for word. I remember that the last time I read it was "Black Lotus Strategy Manual". I read that book 4 or 5 times. I think I will read this book 4 or 5 times in the future. Emotions and all kinds of details. The description is definitely good. The only regret is that there are too few chapters. It would be nice to write more. Every character is portrayed very vividly. Come on!

It's pretty good to watch. Although there was a slight tendency of writing to collapse in the middle and later stages, the rhythm soon returned.

It's quite good-looking, except for the part at the end where the teacher respects the princess who was born, which made me feel uncomfortable watching it. The rest of it is still very good-looking and super sweet.

It looks good, the author writes very well

It's so beautiful. Can the author update it quickly? I want to read it [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

Super invincible and beautiful [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] Chang'e should regret stealing the elixir, and the blue sea and blue sky will make her heart wander every night. Super invincible and beautiful