My Beloved Master: The Yandere Disciple Wants to Make a Move on Me

It's been removed from the shelves [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

The plot is good, but it deviates from the main plot and the title of the book. What the hell I'm here to see is that this master-disciple relationship of yours is not just for the main character and the heroine to be the leader of the Immortal Moon Sect. And when you write it this way, the plot is too damn fragmented. The three disciples and the heroine can understand, what is the leader of Xianle Sect doing? Collecting a harem without any thought. I'm a little skeptical about what's so exciting about your plot? Female competition? Or the yandere version. There is not a single point of conflict in the entire article. Not a single plot development. From the beginning to the end, there is no depth to any plot. The plot between the protagonist and his young and eldest apprentice, as well as the protagonist and the returning second apprentice and the heroine, has not yet concluded, and it has changed to the head of the Xianle Sect. Too deliberate. It's like you're playing cards with six people at the same time. Let's talk about it first. Let me go, shouldn't the early plot be attractive? If you write like this, all the people will run away. We all came here for the apprentice and master in your profile, and the apprentice and master in the title of your book. So what are you doing here? There is not a single in-depth plot. Still laying out here. It doesn't matter if it's a good layout, but the result is to collect first. So speechless. I've read a lot of harems, but this is the first time I've seen it written like this.

If you ask me to accurately explain some of the reasons, in fact, there are still some flaws with this article, it's just that it's relatively new, but everyone, right, well, if you ask me to accurately explain some of the reasons, in fact, there are still some flaws with this article, it's just that it's relatively naive, but right, everyone, well, I'm already very tired from work, and if you have to worry about these things anymore, it's not very good for you and me, right? What is the purpose of reading novels on the Internet? To relax and make you feel better. Of course, if you say it is the kind you want to jump into directly, well, it specializes in this kind of battle of wits and courage and relying on means. As for this book, I suggest you not to read it, because it is really a novice.

The new work of Shi Feng Immortal Emperor Mu Mu Zi, my family has lowered the rating. Of course, I am a native 🐕, I love to read it

So much nonsense.

Every attitude of the woman is very obvious, but the protagonist keeps finding various reasons to reject and ignore

We should start a group and make some extras [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Author, did you draw inspiration from this book? I seem to have read that the male protagonist is also named Ye, the plot is the same, and there is also a comic book However, the Destiny Child in it is a male. The author still made some changes to the plot. It is still good. I hope the author will continue writing. I am a local dog and I like to read it.

The plot is very strange. For an ungrateful person who is determined to kill the male protagonist, just because he regrets it, he is fine and still stays with him. It really means that as long as he is a beautiful woman, there is no limit to forgiveness! 6

I didn't want to listen to it until halfway through the first chapter. It was the same cliche, the same delicate and artificial, and I guess the rest of it was like refusing to welcome you.