My Sister in Runeterra Is One of Many

The pace is slow, the male protagonist's image is full-bodied, and he is a bit abusive at the beginning, but his strength increases rapidly after entering the balanced practice. In a semi-invincible novel, the male protagonist should be the clone or reincarnation of a certain giant. The writing is also good, and the author fills in the pits he dug step by step, which is pretty good. In the harem story, the confirmed heroine is Xia. The heroines to be accepted should include Qin Nu, Dao Mei, Dao Mei's sister, Ball Girl, and Widow. I hope the author will not forget his original intention, continue to work hard, and collect all the beautiful ones, Ahri, Spider, Enchantress... I look forward to the author's subsequent plots.

It's still okay to write, and you don't need to be too influenced by others, author. You just need to capture the audience that the plot you write wants to serve. It was difficult to agree with others, so Yiwei listened to suggestions and wrote that he was not good at writing and forced to change the outline. It will only look worse. I can guarantee you that there will be worse novels than yours, don't stress too much.

It's a rare fan fiction. In an environment like Rotten Eggplant, where most of the fan fiction is written by AI or where fan fiction is self-righteously adding bad settings, the author can look at the background story, is willing to respect the official good settings, and is written by a human being. I cherish it very much.

It's pretty good. The plot and rhythm are very good before meeting the bald man. After he dies, his strength reaches its peak. When he accepts Jinx, he has laid the foundation for a harem (the author writes that after he has strength, he stops pretending) and spends too many chapters on Jinx's side. At the end, he returns to Ionia. In my personal opinion, it's quite nice except for the Piedmont section.

Hao Kan is quite satisfying so far. It does not rush to expand the world view from the beginning, but follows the footsteps of the protagonist and the story line. It feels that there is still room for improvement in the emotional drama. Finally, I will say that most of the problems in web novels can be solved through a large number of updates. Sometimes you can clearly guess the next development. , But due to the update speed, readers need to endure quite a few excessive chapters. If this part is not grasped well, it may have an impact on the reader's reading experience. For example, when you are halfway through your meal, your boss will call you and ask you to work overtime, and you must work overtime before you can continue eating. It is estimated that many people will be unhappy (it is not very vivid, everyone can understand the spirit). This can be regarded as a characteristic of online writing (personal opinion, stacked armor, past)

It's been more than a year since I've been following Faster. The author thanks you for your book's companionship and good reviews, but I haven't made up for it for you. . This year I entered the factory like a cow and was tired every day. I came back at night and looked through it again. It can be much better than AI, come on, have a happy life

There is a saying that the author really has two brushes in writing character dialogue. It is rare to see dialogue in Tomato that is so natural and fits the character's personality. Even if the game is left aside, it still makes me believe in the existence of the characters and the world view. It has the feeling of movie lines and is very vivid. Except for the emotional scenes, which are very rough and will be deducted big points.

After waiting for a long time, I finally talked to Xiao Jin, please stop abusing me, okay [almost crying]

It's okay, the writing is not particularly ugly.

It's quite interesting. I would like to write more emotional dramas [laughing evilly]. I love watching it.