The Transcender Game

The author did a great job. The protagonist Bai Ze is very specific, calm, and good at planning, but there is a bottom line. However, the images of other characters are not clear enough. I know that adding too much description to the supporting characters may overwhelm the protagonist. However, the author's writing of the supporting characters is too confusing. If it were written as a group portrait, the supporting characters would not be described enough. In the story of Maria, there are many parties competing in the castle, including a protagonist team, an opponent team, a church force, a large organization opposed to the church, and the undercover agents deployed by the big forces to interact and fight with the players. The author also added the intrigue between the player teams, each with their own ideas and purposes. From chapter 263 when I wrote this review, to chapter 244 when I started to sneak into the castle, there are only 19 chapters in total. This chapter is too few and cannot be written clearly, giving people a very messy feeling. The author can add more chapters when writing about the intersection of multiple forces. Like the example I just mentioned, I feel that I can write at least 24 chapters. Even if the author wants to reduce the word count, he can add more chapters (*^ω^*)

Very good, just like a substitute messenger playing the Lord God game The author is in charge of the game. The writing method that consumes the most brain cells depends on when the level drops. With the author's character level, the decline will be over soon.

The writing is good. I have a small suggestion. When writing supporting characters in the future, can you just use codenames that reflect their abilities, such as Swordsman, Gunslinger, etc. It's a bit difficult to remember the names of supporting characters and their abilities every time you do a copy. Please 🙏

Personally, I think it's a good book. Anyway, it's not too low among the books I've read. I recommend it.

Ignore some minor bugs and forget about the villain's brainlessness. It's very interesting, I finished reading it in one sitting

I like this kind of protagonist

There is no need to destroy them all every time

The rhythm is very tight, which is the only shortcoming. It's really good-looking. Full marks must be given

Not bad, why doesn't anyone watch it?

Novel design, classic IQ novel