The Wise One of Equestria

It's good, but I felt the protagonist's involvement was too limited (although this is a form of wisdom—avoiding excessive interference in the plot to prevent unexpected events). However, I still really liked the author's original plot elements and the later use of these wisdom elements.

I'm giving myself a full score! [Got it]

It's a great read! The plot is fun and engaging, and the writing is excellent. I've seen many good books, but this one is definitely among the top in my opinion. Author, keep up the good work and don't give up on this book!!! Wait a minute, author, I just remembered something funny (✪▽✪) Imagine writing all these scenes completely in Purple Moon's Friendship Notebook!

The character is extremely rational in the early stages, excessively so, and strives for perfection. This leads to their later descent into darkness. After this transformation, they understand the truth and reach another level, remaining rational while also revealing their emotions. The friendships within the story are handled well, neither feeling distant nor overly ambiguous. I don't understand why the score is so low; it could easily have reached 8 points.

The author's writing is good; the protagonist is like a normal, natural person, conforming to natural laws or physical laws. However, the protagonist clearly exhibits some emotionality without much preparation or thought. The "darkened" version of the protagonist feels weaker than the non-darkened version.

I initially thought it was genderless and didn't read it, but later, having run out of books, I patiently continued and found it surprisingly good. I could feel the protagonist's humanity (or perhaps equine nature?) Becoming increasingly rich. Determining the gender might be a key turning point (in my opinion). So far, it seems to have many partners with Twilight (hopefully the female lead).

The protagonist's personality was too cold in the early stages, like a robot, and he didn't participate in the main plot at all. But that's okay, I liked it. After thinking for a long time, I came up with a reason to deduct one star: the updates are too slow! Can you update faster? After thinking for a long time again, I decided to encourage the author. I'll waive this one star!

This is the best My Little Pony fanfiction I've read so far! It not only breaks away from the current trend of homogenization in My Little Pony fanfiction, but the character development and some novel settings are also excellent! The author's attention to some lesser-known characters and the protagonist's philosophical insights are particularly unique. Keep it up, author!

Amazing! Friendship is magic! And I have an idea: late in the game, there could be a plot point where Radiant Awakens realizes his friends are getting old. Then, Radiant Awakens captures all those with powerful magic, acting like a villain to show the M6, making them believe he has truly changed. (A thousand words omitted).

Go go go updates! The author keeps it up, it really fits the tone. Personally, I feel it's similar to *Night Rain*, but I hope they don't throw in a nasty twist at the end 😠