Surviving the Blood Sea: From the Start, Three Supernatural Powers! I Rule Over All

It's okay, but does Lin Na really not want to kill her? He has already boarded the pig's foot boat and plans to steal it. Are you sure you want to keep it and not kill him?

A thief said in front of the protagonist that he went to rob a house and failed because the security was too strong. Then he wanted to team up with the protagonist. What does this mean? The protagonist can tolerate such instability.

I remember that a thief came to your house to steal things. When he met him, he told him to put down his things and leave. Oh, is it this gift?

He asked for 500 wood from the little brother's tree, and then left him alone to find the treasure, and then brought hatred to the little brother. The protagonist is really human.

(Above average) Excellent +/8.0+ Points, mark,,,,,, The sense of substitution is good, the plug-ins are good, the setting is excellent, the writing is excellent, the rhythm is good, the imagination is good, the characters are good, the main plot is good, and the logic is good. (11) Extra points: none Personal feelings: The setting is perfect, but I don't like the style. #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. 1. Evaluation of the novel (1) First impression: sense of substitution, plug-ins, settings (2) Overall experience: writing style, rhythm, and imagination (3) Detailed description: character, main line, logic (4) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... (5) Evaluation: ① Excellent (+4), ② Excellent (+2), ③ Good (+1), ④ Average (0), ⑤ Unknown (0), ⑤ Poor (-1), ⑥ Extremely poor (-3). Centered on "lower than average/four stars good/7 points", the evaluation criteria are based on the first nine items, and additional points can be deducted for other items. Every +2 evaluation will increase the score by one level, every -1 for middle or lower will decrease the score by one level, and every -2 will decrease the score by one level. 2. Rating of the novel (1) Shangshang (a good book that suits my taste very well, unexpectedly excellent): (24) Five-star quality++/10 points+. (2) Superior (recognized by everyone as a good book, the number of updates exceeds 1,000): (18) five-star excellent +/9.5 Points, (20) five-star excellent/9.5 Points+, (22) five-star excellent +/10 points. (3) Shang Xia (good books with rigorous and self-consistent logic, good books that do not meet taste): (12) Five-star excellent++/8.5 Points, (14) Five-star excellent-/8.5 Points+, (16) Five-star excellent/9 points. (4) Above average (a good book in the conventional sense, without special features): (4) Five-star good++/7.5 Points, (6) Five-star excellent-/7.5 Points+, (8) Five-star excellent/8.0 Points, (10) Five-star excellent+/8.0 Points+. (5) Middle to lower (a work with average performance, no outstanding highlights, and no major problems): (-5) Three-star poor++/5 points, (-4) Three-star average-/5 points+, (-3) Three-star average/6 points, (-2) Four-star average+/6 points, (-1) Four-star good-/6 points+, (0) Four-star good/7 points, (+2) Four-star good+/7 points+. (6) Xia Shang (a novel with major flaws, but there are still some merits): (-13) One star is extremely poor +/1 point, (-11) ② One star is poor -/2 points, (-9) Three stars are poor/3 points, (-7) Three stars are poor +/4 points. (7) Xiaxia (a book with good writing but distorted views) , the content is harmful, seriously affects the reading experience, and makes people physically uncomfortable): (-15) Two-star extreme bad +/-1 point, (-17) Two-star extreme bad/-3 points, (-19) Two-star extremely bad -/-6 points, (-21) Two-star disaster++/-7 points, (-23) Two-star disaster +/-8 points, (-25) Two-star disaster/-9 points, (-27) Two-star disaster -/-10 points. (8) Medium (the reading experience is disappointing, far from expected, personal experience): Unknown three stars/x points. (9) Inferior (a novel that is unattractive to read, no evaluation): 2 stars unknown/0 points.

Very good, decisive in killing, with almost no mercy. There are two big poisonous points. One of the contracted creatures was controlled to beat herself, and Linna had already seen something and was about to steal it, but was stopped and there was no punishment. The one who stole the ore was killed directly. Although it can be said that the protagonist was saved in the end, I don't know why the protagonist just believed her, and I don't think the protagonist can't beat her in that scene. A little stretched in the back

The protagonist's profession is a Dominator. The Dominator's dominated objects are affected by other people's range props and attack the protagonist without distinguishing between friend and foe. You don't know how many people you have run away with. According to this setting, what use will he have as a ruler in the later stage? Just use a high-level range of mind control props, and the protagonist will be beaten to death by a group of his own dominated objects.

I have a suggestion, it's quite interesting, but is the protagonist really self-interested? Now I only see the protagonist's indecision, cutting the grass without eradicating the root.

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The FX protagonist is invincible