Oh No! I'm the Beijing Tycoon's Heir's First Love

The author is really trying to make up for it, I like it so much (´◊ω◊｀)

After watching about half of it, I feel that the plot is quite good, it doesn't feel too bland, it's not easy to get bored, and there are some appropriate plot ups and downs. Anyway, overall it's awesome! ! ! It's a very delicate article. Although some people always look at it anxiously, but I can't stand it. The strawberry cp is too sweet hahahaha [blowing kiss] After reading it, I like it [like] the strawberry cp is really sweet! ! ! [The grass has been planted][The grass has been planted][The grass has been planted] The plot is generally very good, and it is more coherent. I feel that the writing in the later part seems to be a bit rushed. I guess you want to finish it quickly? (It's just a guess, the tonic is real * slip and kneel. Jpg) So the plot behind it will be a little sketchy, but there's still nothing wrong with it [Blowing Kiss], it's just sweet! ! [Sparrow Food Masterpiece] If you really want to stick to the logic, maybe three points, but I won't say too much. After all, it's better not to spoil anything. The first one is about the author of the original novel and how the world in the book works, and how the bug came about. I feel that this hole has not been filled, or maybe I missed it. After all, I read it all night, and my brain and eyesight were somewhat difficult during this period [Petrochemical] The second one is about what the heroine's mother thinks. I personally feel a little awkward about those entangled psychology. After all, there was a part of the plot where I felt that I was enlightened by the heroine's father, but he continued to have that stubborn mentality. In fact, the plot is quite reasonable. I just want to know more about what she is thinking, but the book is also finished. This is just my personal talk and not for reference. I'll just make up my own mind [currently in progress] The third one is about the heroine's grandparents. In the end, it seems that the grandparents still don't know the truth about the heroine's life experience. It should be another forgotten hole (I don't rule out the possibility that I missed it again [star]) This is also the first time I have written a book review so seriously. It took me more than half an hour to compile [face covering] and I wrote it after reading it all night long, so my brain may be a little awkward. I apologize if it makes you feel a little weird. [Sending my heart] All in all, it's a good read [already planted][already planted]. I just hope that there will be a more specific side story about Wanwan and Pei Yichen's relationship when they were young. I'm a little curious about how sweet they would be when they were young [shy]

The plot is novel and overall very interesting! The male and female protagonists are very sweet and the interaction is very interesting. Both of them are determined to choose each other. The female protagonist is a very beautiful, real and good girl. The male protagonist is really a pure Wanwannao in front of the female protagonist. Look, the heroine's father is really good. Although he appears a little less, he really loves his daughter. However, the ending may feel a bit rushed. The bad guys (I think those who are bad to the protagonist are all bad guys) did not get corresponding backlash in the ending, which makes people a little angry.

Why doesn't anyone read such a beautiful book? [What]

It's really beautiful [blowing kiss][sending heart][laughing]

The fried chicken looks great! !

The heroine is a bit self-righteous at first, but becomes sweet later on.

It's beautiful, why are so few people watching it? [Chigua]

Ahhhhhh, if I look back after a week, the result will be over! ! It's really great. Can the author add a few extra chapters? ! ! Not enough to watch at all! ! !

Fried Chicken is good to watch (♥∀♥), but can the author make more extras?