I’m Warning You, Don’t Steal My Potion

(Personal experience) The text of this novel itself is not obscure, nor does it have complicated sentence patterns. Most of the narratives are very straightforward, but you often have to go back and reread it to understand what the author is describing. The overall picture quality is weak, and sometimes the transitions are abrupt. Especially when listening to a book, I feel like the words are sliding through the cerebral cortex without leaving any trace [face covering] I'm still trying hard, hoping that the following text will allow me to immerse myself in the story.

It looks good. In the interstellar military academy group portraits I read, most of the female protagonists are mecha soldiers and mecha designers. There are very few pharmaceuticals, and few families can provide the protagonist with enough money to learn mecha soldiers. So far, the heroine's love and seriousness about medicine are really admirable. In my eyes, the heroine is half a doctor, and pharmacology is really a headache, so I really admire the heroine. No, I have no way to express the praise in my mind [crying] In short, I think this is a very good, very good and beautiful book. As a qualified reader, my biggest hope is that the author will continue to read more and more, and this book will definitely be liked by more and more people [Sending Hearts]

It's okay, the plot and characters are good, but I feel that the characterization of the characters is a bit thin, such as appearance, personality, facial expressions and tone, etc. It could be more descriptive, as well as the content of the dialogue. It is not necessary to write the dialogue first and then the speaker, which is easy to confuse. You can appropriately add some environmental descriptions or time reminders to serve as content dividing lines. The above is just my personal opinion. But I still like this plot very much!

I read it every day with my heart scratching my heart, and I really like Nan Zheng and Ning Tang (the author hasn't updated it yet today, so I clicked on the homepage to find out that the protagonists of this article's introduction are actually Nan Zheng and Cheng Li, not Nan Zheng and Ning Tang😕 Where's my sister Ning) (The total number of characters in Cheng Li's appearance is estimated to be less than 100) Nan Zheng and Ning Tang's abilities are incredible, but the two sisters are the kings of scrolls. Growth-type group portrait article 😚 Love to read, more updates from the author I flipped through the book five times and found that the author had updated 4,000 pages in half a year. It's so delicious that there are more updates. The fourth editor's evaluation (caught up to the latest chapter 598): I have read it back and forth seven or eight times, and I find it very interesting every time I read it.598，（，，，，），，：，；，， Repeatedly reading from the beginning to the latest chapter in one breath, coupled with today's coherent and rigorous team timeline of Chapter 598, makes me feel that I am not reading a novel, but watching the wonderful life of another real world through the author [please update]

I really like the friendship between Nan Zheng and Ning Tang, as well as the family relationship between Nan Zheng and Yu Dad. The characterization is not very deep in a small part, but I really like Yu Dad's character. Personally, I feel that it is more appropriate to change it to no CP.

The whole book is beautiful. I would like to give you a small suggestion: it would be better to add dividing lines when changing scenes. Sometimes I don't know when the scene changes while I'm watching it, and it's a bit confusing. The plot is still very well written👌

Hmm... The book reviews here are quite consistent with my feelings after reading it. The plot is good and I can say it is very good, but I don't know why I feel tired after reading it. The picture is not enough, action words can be added. You can also add this to the environment category to slow down the pace. After all, your eyes will be tired after reading for a long time. You can add more descriptions of people, not just descriptions of beauty, but descriptions that reflect personal characteristics, such as details of facial expressions or details of hand movements. Come on! ! Actually, I only want to give it 4, because it really makes my eyes tired from watching it, but the plot really suits my taste. Now I've read Chapter 72. Except for the uncomfortable chapters about the social competition, everything else is good.

Finally, we found the aboriginal people. They were not people from another time and space, nor were they adults pretending to be children. This is the (≧ｗ≦) book I want! ! The characters are very delicately drawn, and they are the kind of protagonists who grow up slowly and cannot hit everything right away.

It's very interesting to watch, and the plot logic is all right. It's like a micro-group. The heroine is very powerful and she also has a friend who is almost evenly matched in ability. It's the first time I've seen this kind of story with two heroines. (That is, her roommate is almost as awesome as her, but the heroine feels better.) Both of them are mecha soldiers, but on the other hand, the heroine is good at potions, and her friend Ningtang is good at mechas. Both of them are very powerful at that age in their respective fields, and one of them dares to do what the other dares to say.

It's good-looking, the plot is relatively compact, and there aren't many water characters. Nor is it the common imitation of Wei Sanwen. There are relatively few military games, and the characters are also very interesting. The two heroines help each other and grow up. They are all intelligent types, not the clinging type, nor the plug-in type. I'm fed up with those mindless articles that appear to be very capable, but in reality can only rely on the male protagonist, or use cheats.