You Were Asked to Write a Love Song, So Why Did You Write Puella Magi Madoka Magica?

This article is a bit poisonous, so poisonous that I feel that "My Life Is Given to You" is actually not that poisonous [face covering]. You might say it's not long, but it's boring and procrastinating. Most of the content is just a retelling of the plot of the Magic Circle in words. However, what most readers of this kind of novel want to read is the audience's reaction, which is a cool point. But the reaction of the audience in this article is like that of a fake person, not to mention the protagonist, who is just a camera. He doesn't have many scenes, and he always shows a mysterious smile when he goes back and forth. Why, look at my mysterious smile or not [awkward laughter] Now that it's like this, you can only watch the plot. But you have read the plot, and there are a lot of repetitions in this article... Are you correcting your copying homework? [Thinking] Also, the music company wants the copyright to the music, but the problem is, isn't the protagonist an animation artist? It's true that anyone can come up with melodies, but for the songs themselves to be good, you need professionals. Don't you doubt it? They are all humans and machines, right? I only love reading fan fiction, and I have been reading it for a few years. The juvenile fiction written by Hurry Up is better than this [face covering] A world without classic works + time-traveling protagonist + audience comments = cool writing, you can use this formula, what are you writing [Like]

Good news: there is a magic circle. Bad news: there is no magic circle.

It's very well written. I've almost never seen anyone write about the magic circle. But why is there always duplicate content?

The plot is okay, but the judges' comments are too one-dimensional so far. The more I watched, the more bored I became, so I quit.

I feel like it was well written, but the referee's words were too formal, so formal that it didn't look like a normal human being.

Nice is very good-looking, with vivid characters. The opening chapter introduces the background of the characters, paving the way for the time travel in the following chapters. The plot of the Magic Circle is vividly described. Make the article more attractive. (Oh, I'm such a genius [laughing evilly][laughing evilly])

It's rare to find a good-looking novel about Puella Magi Madoka Magica, but I feel that the judges' descriptions are a bit lacking, and the descriptions of the plot are quite delicate [laughs]

Brother Shuang is actually the epitome of the magical girl in the Magic Circle world view. She was originally an ordinary optimistic and brave adolescent girl. Kyubey's attitude towards her was just happy to see the success and just go along with the flow. In the end, she ended up like that.

Gua... It's okay, just don't engage in private goods.

Come on! Yuan Yan's lifelong recommendation [blowing kiss] It's just that the judges' comments are a bit too... Well, formulaic. Sometimes it's better to incorporate a little more of your own feelings [smiles]