Survive the Paranormal: My Troops Are the Truly Uncanny Ones

The protagonist doesn't act like a commander at all; he does everything himself. If it weren't for the protagonist's halo, he would have been finished long ago.

No, why bother with this "elite" strategy? Just kill as many as you can summon. The more you summon, the more you kill. The more you kill, the more you summon. If it were me, I'd just kill, kill, kill; there's no need for that. Use tools to dismantle the wood. Just shoot with bullets. If it were me, I'd just shoot, shoot, shoot, shoot, shoot, shoot, shoot. Wouldn't that make me invincible?

So far, it's alright, except the author sometimes uses a lot of exclamation marks and excessive detail. The protagonist is brave and resourceful, and the transactions are fair and just. There are quite a few crises at the moment, and the atmosphere of danger is well-developed. I hope it doesn't become a story that tortures the protagonist; it would be best if it were more enjoyable.

The atmosphere of horror is well-written, but it overshadows the protagonist a bit. The protagonist can be weak, but he needs to grow; he shouldn't be terrified when encountering stronger monsters. His psychology needs to change. 🤔 The army is too small; they need to increase their numbers. The protagonist needs to become stronger.

This is a pretty good survival story. I love this kind of world where danger lurks everywhere, yet the protagonist constantly gets stronger with his overpowered abilities, especially the ability to summon 100% loyal subordinates. The damage from firearms isn't diminished, and he doesn't have to worry about building an organization to gather resources or the infighting among its members.

Great premise, this cheat is innovative, but the suppression of combat power is a bit too harsh. I prefer the kind of game where you mass-produce troops and push hard, something more satisfying, rather than having few troops and having to worry about this and that, resulting in cold sweats and chills down your spine.

So far, although the writing is average, the flaws do not detract from the overall quality. The plot progresses steadily, the logic of the plot is not problematic, and there are no particularly noteworthy flaws. Overall, it is very good.

Good books are free, let's give them away as a way of supporting the authors and prevent them from starving!

The author's writing is indeed good; it's very vivid and makes you feel the eeriness of the monster, with a bit of a Cthulhu vibe. Keep it up!

My score was maliciously lowered! There are bad guys involved! ◝₍ᴑ̑ДO͝₎◞