One Piece: Donquixote, Raised Among the Whitebeard Pirates

It looks great. I really never thought that Don Quixote would develop like this. Likewise, the healing power of the Baituan family cannot be overemphasized. Marco is also an acquaintance in the humanities, hahaha. What I like most about this book is not the cp (of course the cp is also very sweet!), But the family love between the three Don Quixotes. Brother Ming finally behaves like a human being in the article. He is ruthless but also contradictory. When he is angry, he will be determined to kill Rossi, but when he calms down or the incident is over, he will silently care. But after all, Xiaomi Guo and Flamingo are not the same kind of people. The male protagonist arranged by the author is just right. He is crazy in the same vein as Ming Ge. He is equally powerful and independent, but also soft and detached enough. It makes people wonder: If there really was such a Don Quixote, would the original novel have escaped the tragedy of death and injury?

It's okay, the setting is good. When I watched it earlier, I felt that the characters' actions and dialogues were sometimes out of touch, and the writing didn't connect one sentence to the next. The plot progresses quickly later on, and there are some light-hearted jokes and complaints from time to time. The overall reading will be much better, and the interaction between the young couple is also quite sweet.

I originally wanted to rate it 4.5 After reading it, but the plot was so well written that I couldn't resist. My first five-star Tomato novel (I've read 59 chapters so far). The main subject is cp pineapple. Dual strong. He and Dover are twins. He kicked away Xiaomi Guo's bento, but Rossi has not seen the navy again. The protagonist's character also has some Don Quixote paranoia. He is redeemed by the love of Bai Tuan. The fighting method is a bit bloody and has been ridiculed several times by the candy man. The main line is smooth🆗. The ambiguous part of the love line has a little ink, so it is a little abrupt, but it is sweet after being together. There is basically no OOC in terms of characters, but the author has not described the height in One Piece at all. It is a bit strange to see Whitebeard touching the protagonist's head and other actions. There is also very little description of the physical characteristics of the protagonist and other people. Don't watch the farewell of Whitebeard, his family and Roger in the middle of the night (not the top one. I don't know the ending of my dad if I haven't seen the top one). The reason why I decided to give five stars is that these two supporting characters, Helinos and Alinda, only appeared in a few chapters. The author's character creation of the supporting characters is also very full, Helinos! Lu Qi, what are you doing! (Picks up the whip and prepares to whip the leopard) The first book I have read on Tomato... 3.5-4 The summary is that a good hand was wasted and the author was too anxious. Starting from the top, the rhythm becomes weird. If you look at the word count in the table of contents, you can see that it takes at least several thousand words to write something like this... The level of excitement has also been reduced. The two climaxes of the top and the subjugation of Im are completely broken. There is no passion at all and it has become an assembly line. This part of the plot is one of the last in the pirate novels I have read. It starts high and goes low and ends in a hurry. The description of the protagonist's battle in the early stage is gone. Beat Im, what's the use if the protagonist is gone? What's the use if Marco's gone? Shanks is gone and I don't see any use. It's all Shamrock's fault. What about the climax? What about passion? It's basically a one-sentence scene Regarding the relationship with Marco, I can only say that the author wanted them to look like they were in love, but instead of describing the psychology of the protagonist and Marco in a big way, he just wrote I want to kiss you and I love you... In terms of family relationships, Rosinandi appears very little and Dover appears quite a lot. The relationship is quite good.

Super good-looking, dual male protagonists, cp Marco. The protagonist is Doflamingo's twin brother, and their brotherly relationship is particularly well written! The same goes for Red Hair and his brother, who are best friends and bad friends with Perospero. The daily interactions are particularly well written! I loved watching it so much 🥰

So pretty! ! ! Marco, don't be a coward and confess your feelings quickly! ! !

It's very beautiful. Please give me more. It's not enough.

Nice. It's a really good one among 🍅One Piece fics. Everything about the character is well grasped and there is no OOC. The protagonist seems to be a bit of a drama queen and is crazy. I really like this attribute. Personally, the only shortcoming is that their early relationship was together. There were relatively few emotional lines before. I can understand why they are together, but I want to see the detailed process. The main plot is pretty well written.

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I really like this kind of narration from another perspective, and the author's writing is very close to the original work. It is not very OOC. It needs to have plot and emotion, and the narrative rhythm is compact and not procrastinating.

I just said that the cover is familiar. I have read all three books [laughs][laughs][laughs]