
I Raised My Female Disciple Myself, but Her Devotion Has Turned Twisted
亲手养大女徒弟,她竟孝心变质
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 528k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Eastern Cultivation
- Updated
- 1y ago
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See allI’ve Recently Gotten into Single-Female-Lead Stories. Any Good Recommendations?
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Master-Disciple Romance, Male Master and Female Disciple
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A Man Disguises Himself as a Woman and Enters a Sacred Land or Sect for Female Cultivators
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The Female Master Becomes Yandere Later On
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The male lead is rigid and traditional. He believes that once someone becomes your teacher, they are your father for life, and would never do anything improper. He treats the female protagonist extremely well, but purely out of a teacher's affection and compassion. After she confesses her feelings, he expels her from the sect to avoid society's judgment. The female protagonist then turns dark.
Looking for Gender-Swap Romance Where the Girl Confesses First
I've read a lot of gender-bender stories, and the guy is almost always the one to confess first. I want to read a story where the protagonist is feminized first, then the girl pursues the guy. (=^▽^=)
A Cultivation Novel with a Powerful Female Lead
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It's not bad, but there's too much plot and not enough character development. I think this book is more suited to those who like plot, while those who prefer the emotional interactions between characters might not stay.
It's quite good, though. I hope there will be more romance. Also, could you please stop having the female lead develop feelings for the male lead through a disguise? It feels a bit off, especially since the male lead is already so doting on her. Just reveal Ning Li's true identity directly; there's no need for the disguise.
The subject matter is quite novel and has its highlights, but the plot is rather ordinary. Dull and tedious
The flaws don't detract from the overall quality; it's a great work, just to my taste. Finally, it's not all female-centric male protagonist stories anymore. Sometimes I wonder, those novels portray the male leads as so perfect, like they'd die if they didn't constantly mention his good looks, good family background, and strong fighting abilities.
This novel gave me a feeling similar to reading a comic book about cultivators fighting with superpowers, but this doesn't mean the plots are similar; on the contrary, they are almost completely different. It's just that they evoked some similar feelings in me.
It has a similar feel to Bai Ya's "Who Made Him Cultivate Immortality," and the writing is quite good. Overall, it's commendable on Tomato Books. The setting is decent, and the plot doesn't have any major flaws. It's a pity that it's not a paid chapter on Tomato Books, so the author's pacing is a bit lacking. The emphasis is uneven, and the pace is too fast.
When can we fast forward to education and training? 😏
Well written! It's just not very popular, which makes me worried the author might not be able to make a living. I'm giving it a five-star review to support the author!
I've read part of it, and so far it seems pretty good and to my liking. There's just one tiny little problem, though, and I'm a bit confused: who exactly is the main character? Which description makes them the protagonist? @EvenFanIsOxygenDeficient
It's alright, some ideas are there. The author has freedom, write whatever comes to mind. (I support you in that spirit.) As for whether it's good or bad... I'm not an expert. But judging from the traffic and rating, it's probably below average. Also, there are some awkward parts, but let's leave that aside for now, like that serious punch, I didn't really feel anything in my fingers.