The Dragon Clan? Burn It! Burn It!

I think it's average. The first three chapters are a bit witty. There's also a King Quan Yan Ling who insists on growing long white hair. Even the Dragon King wouldn't do that.

The writing is good, but it could be better. The main character didn't save Ye Sheng and Shutoku Aki because he wasn't familiar with them and didn't want to save them. However, in the first battle with Eri and the others, he chose to stay with her. To be honest, for those who have read the original work, this is acceptable, but I think that a heavy blow will be more outstanding. This does not affect the decision to save Eri later, because normal people will develop affection for girls like little monsters after getting along with them for a long time in real life. The protagonist's indifference to Shutoku Aki and Ye Sheng at the beginning is different from his feelings for Eri. I can't help it. The writing and ink used by Jiangnan to portray these three people are not of the same level. It's good, but it's also a bit of a pity. It's still substituted into the original work.

Brother, you either have to use Zedian Naye instead of the Heavenly Earth Tribulation Fire. Zedian Naye and Heavenly Earth Tribulation Fire are two different things (?). Zedian Naye is just a knife, and Heavenly Earth Tribulation Fire is the incarnation of the Red World Demon God Alastair. The Broken Heaven and Earth cannot be used without Alastair. Then if you bring the Heaven and Earth Tribulation Fire, even without the protagonist Yalastir, it is definitely enough to kill those dragon kings. Unless you don't control it with the power of Feng Jue and Existence, then if you don't give this Heaven and Earth Tribulation Fire, it will have no use other than launching an awesome attack. After all, there is no Yalastir in it, right? Then why don't you just give it to the Heavenly Fire Holy Judgment? Isn't that different? They all sacrificed their lives to launch a powerful attack, but it was not suspected of overpowering the combat power.

It's rare to find a well-written Dragon Clan fanfic. There are very few dragon fanfics. The protagonist and Nono are written with a CP feel. Either the character design is wrong, Nono is written in a green tea-like and unpleasant way, or the character is written in a way that does not fit the character. Or just change the heroine. I feel that Nono in the article is very suitable for Lu Fang. She is an eccentric little witch. It is not surprising that she likes Lu Fang, who is powerful, arrogant, arrogant, and free-spirited. Especially the part where Nono drove Lu Fang for a ride to soak in the hot springs and then heated the hot springs. This is how the relationship between them should be. Very natural and harmonious. The little miko who refused to admit defeat might have been aroused to be competitive during the 3E exam. Being competitive and curious is the beginning of a girl falling in love with a boy

This rating is a bit low, it's funny and humorous It feels like I have to force myself to get the CP. Nono doesn't match the protagonist at all, and it feels awkward.

This fanfic is indeed well written, and the character's personality is vividly described, but I feel that Caesar is a bit distorted.

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I have read many novels in the past and could not understand them. Just look at those powers. So powerful. Don't give in. Courage. Don't really like villains. Or maybe I just don't like people who oppose the protagonist. I just see too much and think too much. Then there are different perspectives. No matter how good a book is, it may carry some of a soul's views and confessions about the world.

Has the author never read the Dragon Clan prequel? Why did he write the White King as a female?

It is too unreasonable to replace Lu Fang in memory with Nono. Even if it is a replacement, replacing him with Lu Mingfei or Chu Zihang or even Angers, Xia Mi is more reasonable than Nono.