After I Died, My Junior Brother, Who Cultivated the Heartless Dao, Fell to the Demonic Path

One of the few articles that I could finish reading. I don't know why the rating is so low, it's worth at least 7.6-8 Points. The vocabulary is not gorgeous, but it is very warm. It can explain things clearly in a few words. The protagonist always gave me a faint feeling of being alive and slightly dead, which was very funny. To be honest, the plot is old-fashioned, but the narrative technique is refreshing, there is no bad ending, and there is no protagonist pretending to be mad and stupid with passion, which makes me very comfortable. At the end, every supporting character has their own place. These are handled very well, and it is a good article in my mind. It's really hard to read it if you can't accept this bland approach. I hope someone can calm down and read it, and I also look forward to the author's new works.

On the contrary, I think the author's writing style is very good. Either the words are gorgeous or the writing is good. It is difficult to explain the plot carefully and with enough details to be warm and tender in just a few words. I like this book very much. From a small number of single perspectives, it is easier to see the friction caused by the cognitive differences between the two people. It is very interesting. I love this book!

It's very interesting. It's a first-person narrative. The protagonist's life experience is told from the protagonist's perspective, with secrets and twists revealed step by step. At first, some people commented that the protagonist's character is not perfect, but I think it is very real. Human desires and fears, because he and their imperfections in human nature, are the souls of flesh and blood. The two protagonists in the story are both chess pieces wrapped up in fate. All thoughts, twists and misunderstandings are like fools of fate. Fortunately, the ending is he. I really like Yao Yu's extra [Adoration], the sweetness is beyond the limit [laughs] Push push push🥰🥰🥰

The writing style is quite interesting, but the setting is easy to read, or maybe it won't be revised after it's finished. The characters are a bit pretentious, but the writing can make up for part of it. He likes to leave small clues, and he can mention the foreshadowing many times. It's impossible to tell if there will be a big twist. The comment section of the book friends is more confusing. The middle period was a bit draggy, but in the early stages the two of them were able to tolerate the unpleasant things they said, so the plot wasn't really a big flaw. It can be seen that the author is particularly fond of this kind of character. When there are no major misunderstandings, the awkward and sour writing becomes very smooth, as if for this plate of vinegar-wrapped dumplings. But just eating dumplings is okay, but just being jealous is not okay. The dumplings are still delicious.

The story is very good. I don't like to read first-person articles, but this article is really interesting. Even if it is read in first-person, it won't make you feel uncomfortable. Instead, you can better put yourself into the character's perspective. Only then did you find that it is very interesting to read the story from a character's perspective.

To be honest, I think the first-person narrative is a test of writing skills. This is the first first-person novel I have read on Tomato. There are many themes about brothers and sisters. The plot of our novel has ups and downs, and the relationship develops slowly (I think it is not suitable for people who are impatient). In the early stage, both of them were not talkative, and there were many misunderstandings and contradictions. Later, as they slowly grew, I watched Gong become addicted. The tongue attacks everyone equally, and later learns to coax Shou, hahahaha, and starts to think that Shou is a vicious beauty. Later, it is discovered that he is a chess piece and can't help himself. It was the sect that raised him and wanted to make him a waste, which led to his arrogant personality. In fact, he is very kind at heart. Later, he considered that many people had wronged him alone. The love between the two fathers is also very easy to relate to. Finally, I wish the two young lovers a long life! ! Good writing needs to be savored slowly. All book friends are destined to meet each other, so I will accompany you here. See you all! !

[Admiration] Niu's book! You took away three of my firsts. It was my first time to read an entire book on Tomato! This is my first time to review a book! This is the first time I want to follow an author! Indeed, I also commented and paid attention [blowing kiss]. I really like it! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] I read sporadically during the day and listened to the book for two nights. It's really rare to find such a good Danmei book in my life! [Sending Hearts] The writing style is very good. It does not pile up empty words. It is simple and vigorous. It deeply conveys the inner feelings of the characters. The buried clues can be connected one by one. The logic is clear. The plot has many twists and turns. One word, good! In terms of character creation, Long Aotian is the best! Goldfinger is welcome! Your love for Jiang Qu makes me cry to death! [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] It's not like others who only know about torture... In this arrangement, you can really hit it accurately and feel better [Learned] The extra episode at the end is also very sweet~[Shy][Shy]Watching it at night will cause tooth decay [laughing] I really love reading first-person stories! [Send heart] It's a big trouble, I'll give birth soon [I'm full]

The plot of the story is so twisty and unexpected that I felt like I had a split personality. Sometimes I was sad, and sometimes I was happy [I almost cried]. Fortunately, the ending was sweet, and overall it was refreshing.

It's so good... The author begs you for more extras. I haven't seen enough. Help, this is the first time I've ever heard of this first-person thing. The first day I discovered this book, I read more than 90 chapters. Now that I have finished reading it, I feel empty, lonely and cold. Secondly, I really loved the scene when Yao Yu came out of seclusion and found out that her senior brother had married someone else. Hahahaha. She was so awkward and unethical in her words. It felt like a reunion after breaking the mirror. The relationship between the two parties was confirmed repeatedly, and the spiritual contract was also very cool.

Highly recommended! I was attracted by the introduction, but when I came in I found that it was a subjective narrative. To be honest, I wanted to give up at that moment, but the setting was very interesting to me. The writing is so good that I stayed up all night reading it [crying]. "The wind at Wuji Gate is very bleak at night. My room is airtight, like a drum that has been blown full. I can only hear the howling wind outside the door and the whipping of branches on the drum surface, which makes people feel frightened."