Infinite: Starting with the Development Bureau

I urged the update, but I didn't see any bad points, it's just that the main character was a bit weak. After traveling through time, he didn't turn into a super human who could rub nuclear bombs with his bare hands and take care of postpartum sows. He knew all the poems by heart and never forgot the history for thousands of years. With his advanced experience and a brain comparable to a computer server, he was able to overthrow the world in one fell swoop.

I just finished watching the first stage and I feel like the rating is low. So far, I have a score of 9 or above. The author has good writing skills and has his own style. On the whole, the setting is reasonable, the logic is self-consistent, and it has its own writing style. It is a good book.

It's quite good and innovative, I hope it can be better, so here are two personal suggestions for your reference: One is the level of professionalism. After the protagonist came out, the launch parameters of the satellite and the applicable parameters of technological weapons were not brought out. The writing knowledge cannot be comprehensive and understandable, but later it was specifically written that the state-owned enterprise complex had no parameters when building satellites. The military's process of entering the world was chaotic, and the atmosphere of blindness was too strong. If the order of formation was not determined, they were scrambling for the deployment points. These two are more prominent. For others, there is no formal process from entering the pirates to opening the door. The report has not been submitted or even written. They go out directly to collect supplies and make a breakthrough. In fact, if you change it, the drug dealer comes back from undercover investigation and the details of the simple report are not submitted. There is no danger in theory when running out to go skydiving, but you may be injured and comatose, resulting in the loss of information. Second, what I expect to see is the full launch of Industrial Cthulhu for crushing, as well as the Gou Dao ten against one and high-level force you mentioned earlier, but it may not be fully reflected in the latest chapter. My personal suggestion is to wake up after coming out, report that the world is rich, have a meeting, start the state machine and issue a red-headed document, hand over the language parameters and situation, state-owned enterprises issue military orders, parameter analysis and resource mobilization can refer to the foreign construction sites in the front line. Domestic companies are ecstatic to come to life, the language situation analysis team transfers 63.76 Supercomputer computing power, the energy at the cave entrance is on holiday, the protagonist is upgraded, just in time, experiment You can enter again, and when you come out, you find that the preparations have been shaken, skyscrapers are rising from the ground, three sets of expanded door-opening teams are on standby, and the drone Dongfeng Intercontinental Base Vehicle Aircraft Carrier is on standby. After entering, the top combat power appears. It is known that the top number of proven enemies is × 10 + the enemy is wide × 2. The intercontinental attack is used to test the backhand. On the other hand, low-level mechanical dogs are showing good luck, drones are flying at low altitudes with human scorpions, and soldiers suppress political commissars to preach policies. That's roughly it. Of course, it's just my personal opinion. If it has reference value, then I'm very happy. If it's not very reasonable, then I hope to laugh it off, so keep going!

The quantity is small, so far it looks ok The author is just practicing his skills, the world view and the path to transcendence are too tedious. I don't know if I've finished writing One Piece World, it's a similar thing. Don't write too many miscellaneous things.

As an author, it would be unjustifiable if I did not give this book full marks.

Overall, this is a good Joten-ryu novel. It does not have the main character Kuku beating up randomly, and the overall narrative line is consistent with the logic. I think the most interesting point is that the author describes the background of the heavens at the beginning. I think it is much more interesting than randomly traveling through time. At least it's not traveling for the sake of traveling. I can't say 9 points. I think he also has 8.5 Points. Where did these 6.7 Points come from? Got cheated?

So far the mix is ​​pretty good. Highly recommended based on current standards. Nice

I've just watched the end of One Piece. It's well written and interesting. The follow-up world view is also big enough. Come on.

The setting is fresh and complex, and the writing style and protagonist's character could be a bit more exciting. At present, there are a little less players with unlimited streaming, so the flashy feeling is not enough. In fact, to improve martial arts, you have to go for a large number of war group portraits.

The setting is good and the storytelling level is okay