The System Ran Away After I Gained Li Chungang's Peak Cultivation

Looking at the entire world of Tianlong, it is nothing more than that Qiao Feng reaches full level at the beginning, Duan Yu cheats in the middle, Xu Zhu steals the full level account, Murong Fu charges money in the early stage, and wastes around when he gets recharged gift packs, he only works in guilds, but does not reach full level in the later stage, and only Jiumozhi kills monsters one by one to level up. Because he bullied Duan Yu in the early stage, he was tricked by Duan Yu in the later stage to take revenge, losing his equipment, deleting his account and quitting the server. Xiao Yuanshan and Murong Boka's bug escalated, and they finally quarreled on the public screen, reported each other, and were banned by GM Sweeper Monk. You Tanzhi picked up the best equipment that others had exploded, and Wang Yuyan was the mission statement NPC. The ending of this drama is: Qiao Feng found his father! Xu Zhu found his father! Duan Yu found his father! Murong Fu found his father! A'Zhu and A'Zi have found their father! Yuyan and several other daughters have found their father! Xu Zhu is the pig's trotter who laughs last

Author, who are you? The Guinness record is typing 807 letters per minute. Calculating that each Chinese character requires six letters, you can type about 134 words per minute. Since you are not a holder, we will calculate it as P100 words per minute. According to WHO standards, a person's healthy sleep time is / hour, and you spend about two hours eating every day. , And then use 20 minutes to go to the toilet, 40 minutes to wash up, one hour to exercise, two hours to get inspired, and another hour to be in a daze, you should have nine hours to type, Linyi typed 435780 words, based on 2000 words per chapter, there should be 36 chapters, but you only put so much content every day, what's going on? To be honest, is this a deduction? No one in the production team dared to rest like this, so the author quickly got up to code!

I hope the author will write a protagonist who kills 200,000 soldiers and horses of the imperial court with one sword, and then let the whole world know about it and make the imperial court show weakness. This comment is proof. I will give you a small gift of ten yuan to support it. The more fun you write later, the better.

If you rate it yourself, why not give it five stars?

I'm not giving you five stars because of how well you write. It's to protect the brothers from lightning. The emperor is not as stupid as you think. The aristocratic family is not as easy to destroy as you think.

1. Advantages 1. Creative setting: Cleverly integrates system flow and popular martial arts elements, attracts martial arts fans by obtaining Li Chungang's peak cultivation, builds a fantasy martial arts framework, and arouses readers' curiosity about the protagonist's adventures in the world. 2. The rhythm of the novel is refreshing: Following the mode of the novel, the protagonist quickly resolves disputes with his powerful cultivation, satisfying readers' needs for a refreshing feeling such as "pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger". 2. Shortcomings 1. Character creation The protagonist is weak: too dependent on Li Chungang's cultivation, his own character growth is not obvious, and his inner world and values are rarely shown, making it difficult to resonate with readers. The supporting characters are stereotyped: mostly to set off the existence of the protagonist, the villain is simply evil, lacks complex character and background, and the relationship between the characters is blunt. 2. Plot structure Poor coherence: The plot connection is abrupt, the emergence of crises and opportunities lacks foreshadowing, and it feels patchwork, which affects reading fluency. Insufficient innovation: the overall plot falls into the cliches of cool writing, with common plots such as sect battles repeated, and a lack of in-depth exploration of the martial arts world. 3. World view setting: The construction is rough, the sect characteristics, Jianghu power structure and other settings are simple, the world view is empty, and the sense of substitution is weakened. (Improvement suggestions) 1. Character creation Strengthen the protagonist's growth: Design a character growth line that is independent of cultivation, such as from ignorance and frivolity to maturity and stability, showing the change in values and enhancing readers' sense of identity. Enrich the supporting characters: Give the supporting characters unique life experiences, personalities and logic, and the villains can have ideals and difficulties, making the character relationships more real and complex. 2. Plot structure Optimize connection: Do a good job of foreshadowing, make events happen logically, and connect crises and opportunities with the previous text to improve coherence. Innovative plot: Breaking out of traditional cool writing routines, exploring deep themes such as the relationship between Jianghu and the imperial court, adding new ideas and depth to the story. The above is just my personal opinion. Overall, it's a very good novel. Also, author, stop being lazy.

It's extremely poisonous. I really can't imagine why so many people are watching it. I'll give it a higher score. I can't be the only one poisoned [face covering]

Poison, it's too poisonous, I can't be the only one who gets poisoned

The plot design is good, but the details inside are not good. If the writing style is better and the details are handled better, the score should be higher.

It's nice, even though it's a fanfic, but overall it's okay.