“My name is Shi Lei. When I was two years old, I was struck by a meteorite from outer space, and that’s when I gained the power to turn things to stone.”
“My ability is just a little bit strong. I can turn even people with higher power levels than mine to stone.”
“Ever since, legends of Medusa have spread across the world. But no one knows that the wielder of this SSS-rank ability is actually a high school student.”
“But when I use my ability against a stronger opponent, I go blind for the rest of the day. I only recover the next day.”
“I like wearing sunglasses and playing the erhu in the streets and alleys, or atop the city.”
“Play the erhu at full health, take on the big boss at death’s door. Is that the right way to live, or the wrong one?”
The apocalypse arrives, and alien species descend! The food chain is turned upside down...
Powerful ability users and ferocious beasts have only two possible fates: become my friends or become stone statues...
Also titled: My Ability Is Petrification, and They All Call Me Medusa
Invincible. I haven't seen such a useless protagonist for a long time. The background of the world you gave is a high school full of gangsters. Before the end of the world, the gangs were smart. Whoever has the bigger fist has the right. The protagonist was very strong before the end of the world. There is no saying that I can't choose. Problem, but others have awakened after more than 20 chapters. Your protagonist has not awakened after more than 50 chapters. Even if he can't beat others, you still have to arrange a blind scene for him. He will be blind for ten chapters. You have nothing to say with this arrangement. After all, he is before awakening. Zhao, but your protagonist's combat power is zero. When facing a group of awakened people, he still pretends that both sides have equal combat power. He doesn't give in at all, and then he is killed by the opponent. Let me guess, what follows is the classic awakening of the protagonist and counter-kill them. This old-fashioned plot is also invincible, and what you wrote for the supporting characters is also quite abstract. In a place where you know it is full of monsters, you see several people who are too scared to move and laugh. You think they are joking, and then directly kill them. There is nothing to say about this kind of intelligence-lowering plot, and I don't want to mention these poisonous points. It can only be said that your main character's combat power is too much, and there is no sense of enjoyment at all. You have to know that most people in Tomato are pursuing the early sense of refreshment and choose to continue reading. Like other post-apocalyptic face-slapping stories, they start to stop eating after 50 chapters. But you are still cowardly after 50 chapters. If it really doesn't work, you can mark it as a slow-burning article in the introduction.
Hey, give the author five-star support!!! ❤️❤️
The worldview structure is quite good, but I felt that the pace was too slow. Although foreshadowing is needed in the early stages of the apocalyptic outbreak, it also seriously slows down the progress of the plot. Furthermore, the time point for the apocalyptic outbreak is during school, and many chapters are used to introduce the forces of the school, which will cause the plot to be a bit delayed. Also, many people in the academy have already awakened and become the first echelon, but the protagonist has not yet awakened after more than 50 pictures, which will make others feel that the protagonist is rubbish. I think other people usually write novels about superpowers that start from a very small place and gradually become stronger. Hypothesis: When the apocalypse breaks out, the protagonist is not in school due to special circumstances, and then due to various reasons, after the protagonist returns to school, he has certain abilities. Some conditions in the early days of the academy are relayed to the protagonist by someone. And in a place with complex forces like the academy, either in the early stages of the end of the world, many authors will quickly get through it with a very concise plot, or it will appear as a small copy in the middle of the plot. Actually, I don't think the novel has too many poisonous points, it's just that the plot feels too slow. At present, I have read the first part that he has not changed, and now I am watching the second part, and finally found that the plot is a bit unclear. After reading the first part, I found that the plot has been greatly changed, and then I found that the change seems to be a bit incomplete. There are some small details in the later part that have not been changed. It seems to be the part where Long Legs confronts three people. In that part, the protagonist guesses that he will awaken after seven days. Anyway, the details are a bit wrong.
Looks good!