I Make a Million a Month in Voice Chat Rooms

I suggest the author to think carefully and lay the groundwork. There are a lot of loopholes. In fact, most of them can be passed at a glance. But it was quite awkward at the class reunion. I haven't seen the heroine before. We met unexpectedly. The elder brother recognized that there was nothing wrong with the heroine. After all, he saw her face during the live broadcast. But the heroine immediately recognized who the other party was, which was a bit sudden, right? Also, don't be too abrupt when the plot turns. Okay. Sometimes it feels like there is no beginning or end. One thing is one thing, and the next second it is something else. For example, Brother Leg's recording of putting him to sleep was quite sudden. The end of the previous chapter was nothing, but the recording of putting him to sleep started at the beginning of the next chapter... I always feel like I can't connect. I repeated it twice, thinking I missed something 🤣🤣🤣The result was so sudden. I don't mean anything else, it's just a small suggestion. After all, I quite like this article. It doesn't feel very smooth to read, so I'll just mention it. The plot is pretty good Come on author

There are only a few details, but overall I feel pretty good.

It's actually pretty good-looking, but it ends relatively quickly.

It's so carefully written.

I really like the synopsis, but the pace is too fast and the plot line is too fast. So much useful information from Dagang should not be lost just like this.

I thought Gu Yan and Lu Ziming were also male protagonists. Overall, they were very good. The female protagonists were 1V5 male protagonists, which was great.

It feels a bit messy in some places and could be written in more detail. It seems to be jumping all the time, but it is very well written. I support the author greatly.