Little Tao the Maid's Escape from Famine in a Chaotic Era

So far so good looking. The writing is very sincere. The biggest problem is that the author's use of punctuation is not standardized, and he doesn't like to use commas. He doesn't give a breath to long sentences, which makes it difficult to read. After entering the marriage line, the charm of all the characters dropped significantly, as if their energy and personality had been drained by marriage, and the problem of random punctuation and no commas has not changed at all.

It looks good, I feel like the author is getting better and better at writing. I like this kind of story where the heroine slowly grows up I don't know why the author wrote a plot in which the heroine is snatched away. This paragraph feels almost like a non-existent one, and it does not contribute to the development of the main story line. The male and female protagonists in the emotional plot are already engaged, and the male protagonist in the imperial examination plot is supposed to work hard. Adding this paragraph feels purely disgusting. Originally, this novel changed from the heroine's escape to the male protagonist's imperial examination, which already made me feel the author's preference for the male protagonist. The only effect of this addition is that the female protagonist was originally better than the male protagonist, whether it was family or emotional, it was the male protagonist who was superior to her, but now it is her who is superior to the male protagonist. There is reason to suspect that the author saw that some readers did not like the male protagonist and deliberately created this story.

I came to give a good review after reading Chapter 37. When I first read the first two chapters, I almost wanted to give up the article. This girl is so pitiful and I can't bear to see her suffer. Her parents are so inhuman. The more you read later, the better it gets, because the heroine is very smart and clever, and the hero is not annoying, and is relatively gentle. The heroine's good friends Sanya and his wife are very good, and the heroine's old aunt is also very good, taking care of her like a mother. The scholar and son they met on the way to escape are also very good. The transformation of the hero's mother is a bit abrupt. The first part is very good, and the second part has a lot of minor problems, but generally it is OK. I like to read this kind of story about using wisdom and wisdom to resolve crisis and lead to happiness. It's so great👍🏻 I've abandoned the article and stopped reading. I've been a little disgusted since the heroine was almost defiled and the hero didn't mind being like that. He didn't even want to touch the heroine on their wedding night. Later, Sanya's man actually took a concubine. Sanya was so smart and had such a pitiful life experience. I thought she was assigned a good man and had a good ending. Even if the man took a concubine, she was not short of money. I thought it was good to get married with her daughter. Why did she have to suffer this kind of injustice? I feel so depressed that I won't watch anymore.

It's a very interesting novel, most of it is quite real. There isn't much halo of the protagonist. Everyone is trying to live a better life. Currently I like Sanya the most, she is sober, independent and has her own ideas. After Xiao Tao got together with Shui Sheng, she felt that she no longer had any ideas as before and was living in her comfort zone. If Shui Sheng changed his mind, she felt that Xiao Tao would not be able to accept it in her current state. She currently relies too much on aquatic life. She obviously accepted Master Zhou's teachings at the beginning, but she felt that she did not learn the essence. I hope that the subsequent author can try to let Xiao Tao be herself. In order to highlight Shui Sheng, Xiao Tao cannot be written as his canary.

The author's writing skills are undoubtedly great, the plot is compact, the characters are well-drawn, and the control group is substantial. "Perfect" love: Xiao Tao + Shui Sheng, Xiao Tao is smart, discerning, willing to learn, and manages the family and finances; Shui Sheng does not run away, is willing to work hard, and is unyielding, able to establish a family, a friend is seen in times of adversity, lovers will eventually get married, and they are a model of two people for life; Love but not able: Uncle Zhou and Aunt Zhao, Wan Ning and Chong Ren, etc., Love each other, consider each other, restrain themselves and return to etiquette, succumb to etiquette, and have great righteousness; Asking but not getting: Sanya's family is a typical example, Minyue, Aunt Yu, etc. Sanya asked for a family, but other people came to the family, Minyue asked for a higher position, but couldn't take it... Exchange of interests: King Xuan and Wan Ning, the Chongyu couple, etc., In their positions, seeking their own affairs, upbringing, gains and losses... Thanks to the author for giving them a "happy ending". In fact, aquatic girls are us ordinary people. The background of kindness is full of holes: timidity, greed, selfishness, gossip, partiality...

This novel is one of the novels that I have read in recent years with excellent writing and content! So I would like to express my humble opinion for the first time, and I hope that such a good work will not be buried in the world [laughs]. The logic of this novel is clear, consistent with common sense and unconventional. The author should have built a big structure before starting to write, and it is smooth and well-thought-out. Every part is stable, powerful and interesting. What's even more rare is that it completely breaks away from the clichéd forms of most novels, making people constantly feel fresh and surprised while reading. The characters in the article are all three-dimensional and vivid. Whether they are the protagonist or the supporting role, they all have their own unique character traits, destiny trajectory and life value. They are full of flesh and blood, and each has its own strengths and weaknesses. Their interactions are reasonable and more reasonable! Please keep up the good work and look forward to more surprises!

Realistic character logic, cool plots, and beautiful group portraits. The novels I like to read all follow this pattern. Unlike some escape stories, where the heroine has a high level of intelligence and the other people's IQs are sealed. All the characters in this novel are very realistic, and because of the relatively refreshing plot, escape will not seem too heavy. It looks great, I love watching it, and I give it a five-star rating!

The escape part is super invincible and beautiful. I especially like the author's character creation. The characters are not broken from the beginning, and the character creation ability is very strong. I particularly want to praise the author for (1) the author's portrayal of the aquatic mother and the author's explanation of why he created it this way. The characters are all three-dimensional and complex. The current Internet environment is very demanding on people. If a person has a shortcoming, he will be criticized by writing and verbal criticism. Many authors also like to write a single character image, either the protagonist is extremely perfect and refined and self-interested, or the supporting role is full of ugliness. So I admire the author for not being afraid of being scolded and bravely portraying the characters he observes in his own heart and in real life in such an environment. (2) What I admire even more about the author is that Xiao Tao's Yin-Yang Water-born Mom loves to take advantage, which reflects the author's tolerance for imperfect people and the fact that the protagonist is not always right (if this were another novel, Xiao Tao's Yin-Yang Water-born Mother would be portrayed as a cool point, but I prefer the author's attitude) I really like this novel and the author's attitude reflected in it. I think the author is a talented and tolerant person who will write better and better as time goes by. Therefore, our big introduction may consider not using "an incompetent and boring" person, but rather "an excellent and talented person". I can't really relate to Shui Sheng and Xiao Tao, but that's not the author's fault. It's just that I don't relate to this type of cp. The development of their emotional line should be about it later, so I might not read it, so I'm waiting for the author's new book hahaha I also want to say that I didn't like writing book reviews because I felt that my expressive skills were not good, but when I saw that the author would be sad because of other readers who didn't like the work, I wanted to let the author see that there are still readers who like me and support the author's creative attitude but have not said it out loud. I love the author a lot (ღ♡‿♡ღ) and wish you a lot of money [adoration] [adoration] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] By the way, one thing I think is unreasonable is that the protagonist group fled with a donkey cart. They went to the refugee group. Logically speaking, many people in the refugee group should be starving to death. They are extremely vicious. Many people should be thinking about their donkeys and want to eat them. Besides, there aren't many strong men in the protagonist group, just two. Even if they are afraid of Sanya's men, the protagonist group is still small and cannot scare the refugee group. And usually in this situation, some people will coax others to grab the donkeys first, and they will rob them continuously, and they will swarm them, and they can't stop them at all. Anyway, for them, death from starvation is still death, and being shot to death by a Sanya man is also death. Maybe they are lucky, and they can still grab donkey meat.

It is a rare farming novel, and in my heart it is comparable to that of Zhiqifu. The characters in the author's works are flesh and blood, and the plot is fascinating with its ups and downs. The childhood sweetheart relationship between Xiao Tao and Shui Sheng in the book is plain and warm. Sanya's wisdom in life and Zhang Huaiqing are not worthy of such a good sister Sanya. The relationship between Uncle Zhou and Xiao Tao Niang is forbearing and tear-jerking. Love, Yan Zheng's sobriety, the daily interactions between Wan Ning and Shui Sheng's grandson, and Wan Ning's extraordinary but not abnormal intelligence in the overall situation. Although I knew early on that the qualities she had prepared were the perfect choice for the queen, she and Pei Chongren still made me cry a lot. King Xuan is not worthy of Wan Ning, who is as good as us! Finally, I would like to say that the author who is so good at writing can write more, it is not enough!

I don't understand why the score is so low. I saw the update and wanted to read the book, but it turned out to be the first one. I saw that except for the size of the book, the writing style and process are very good. The plot is not streamlined and it is not as low-fat as most of the books on the overall list. The author cares too much about comments! People who like it will also like it😘like me, looking forward to updates❤️