[Note: This is a progression fantasy. Thank you for your support.]
Cultivation means opening thirty-six major acupoint palaces and seventy-two minor ones within the human body.
But for transmigrator Luo Zheng, there's more to it than that.
One day, an immortal descended to the mortal realm and gave him and Xiaopin, the girl he'd found while wandering, a nameless divine art. The immortal said one of them possessed wisdom from a past life, and cultivating the art could awaken it.
Xiaopin awakened her past-life wisdom and left with the immortal, but Luo Zheng cultivated something altogether different with the divine art.
At first, a Jingwei appeared in his qi palace, carrying magical power back to fill it. Later, one incarnation after another emerged:
Hua Tuo, Li Bai, Confucius and Mencius, emperors...
Yang Jian, Nezha, Tripitaka, the Great Sage...
Jingwei, Xingtian, Houyi, Kuafu...
Legends from his past lives came into being, one after another, within his acupoint palaces.
One incarnation after another appeared in another world.
Gradually, people came to realize that Luo Zheng had awakened the wisdom of a past life.
They began to wonder: with so many powerful incarnations emerging from this divine art, could Luo Zheng have once been a celestial emperor in heaven?
It felt good, but something was missing. It wasn't quite a "feel-good" story, though the protagonist's overpowered abilities were still impressive. The protagonist's growth felt a bit slow, and the mortal realm plot was rather uninspiring. Since the first character was a mythological figure like Jingwei, adding a historical figure like Li Bai felt awkward.
The writing is acceptable, but the female characters' scenes could be reduced a bit.
Transformed into a historical legend, they thought I was an immortal emperor. This novel, "The Mortal's Journey to Immortality," is somewhat similar to the "mortal cultivation" genre, but with a less pronounced gangster atmosphere, and the characters are generally logical. The plot development is quite interesting, but the motivations that trigger the events always feel a bit contrived.
After watching it, I have a question: Are there multiple female leads?
Good, now we just have to wait and see if this little frown will become a problem later on.
Are there a lot of female characters?
Keep writing, author! Follow your own ideas and don't let others distract you. After all, you can't please everyone. This novel is quite well-written.
Luo Zheng suddenly thought of the many hardships Tang Sanzang encountered in "Journey to the West," such as the Women's Kingdom and various female demons, which seemed to be able to train his patience and might be suitable for his current situation.
It's pretty good. I hope to see the Monkey King later on.
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