Starting from Scratch: I'm Earth's First Cultivator

It can be seen that the author wrote with intention, so I will give it five stars as an encouragement. I haven't finished reading this novel, so let me tell you what I think. First of all, a person who has been working for several years and has experienced betrayal by his girlfriend will at least be calmer, if not evil. The protagonist feels like a child. Regarding spiritual practice, I hope the author can read about Taoist theory, not just books, but Doubao to learn about it. Also, regarding the protagonist's character, it feels too submissive. That kind of director is still a director no matter what, and his heart is meticulous. You, the author, are like a fool. He has been in a high position for many years, and his background is in real society. Once you investigate, you will know what adventures the protagonist may have, and you should start to test a few things. After all, people's hearts are complicated. But in your case it's like a human and a machine. There are also changes in scenes and the flow of time, just like the world of Conan. There are many other issues that I won't go into. Let's think about these first. As for whether you listen or not, that's up to you. I'm just making a suggestion.

So far it's not bad, but the most important thing is not to lick the official, there must be a boundary between when enough is enough and official [top post] Too much contact with the authorities

The novel is about an ordinary person with good talent trying to cultivate immortality. After all, no one knows how to cultivate immortality~ According to Taoism? Or the Buddhist Dharma? Or something... Innate energy, merit, incense... Who knows what they are, it's just the world's speculation and arbitrary naming of them. I'm just imagining in a parallel world Everyone, please be merciful and be kind in your words. Anyway, thank you for your support(￣￣)

This book is not the kind of fairy-like, charming, overlooking the human world that I imagined, but more like a light-hearted, funny, and self-exciting novel. It is not quite to my taste, but it can be read to kill time.

It's quite pretty! I hope the author will update more Invincible, but also a bit of a snobbery style Hurry up and update [Thinking]

Isn't it marked as a heroine? It's almost fifty chapters, why hasn't it appeared yet?

It's okay. What is the main character's cultivation level? Is he a golden elixir? [What]

A relatively good-looking invincible article, not brainless, can use half a brain [thinking]

What a great book. I don't know what to say, but it is indeed a great book. It's good-looking, very good-looking, but I don't know why there are a few people watching it. It should be because there are too few authors. I suggest the author update it hundreds of times a day. In this case, let alone the people in Tomato, the author will become popular on the short video platform and earn over ten thousand a day.

૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎ა Is too little, not enough at all [face covering] [OK]