Silver Scorpion Beauty

Very nice! In the early stage of Ji Yuan, he acted serious and pretentious [rolls eyes], but later his wife hooked her tail and her eyes turned red, and then she became honest and docilely admitted her mistake and coaxed his wife [smirking] Ji Yuan was callous and ruthless on the outside and was allergic to germs, but he doted on his wife endlessly on the inside. He knew that his wife was a bit yandere, so he would tolerate some secretly jealous behaviors of his wife. Asa is a typical beauty, strong and miserable, with a silver scorpion body, but in fact he is very simple. When faced with evil, he only wants to give up on himself instead of hurting others [almost crying]. Therefore, when facing Ji Yuan, the only person who offers warmth, he will be very possessive and worry about gains and losses. However, he later becomes pampered by his husband little by little, and he also knows how to manipulate (seduce) her husband [laughs evilly]. All in all, the character design impressed me and the plot was fast (I personally love watching young couples falling in love). I was too lazy to write a book review at first, but the author gave me a review last night. I was so moved [blowing kiss] Come on, author [please update]

It is a very good Zerg novel. The two-way love and mutual redemption is the most sincere. It is very heart-wrenching, especially the last sentence, "Because you are here, I become happy." "This happiness made me almost forget the original sin I was born with. This feeling of sin made me breathless." "My spirit has long been terminally ill and there is no cure." I feel really distressed after seeing this. Asa, you are not guilty. You deserve this sincere and incomparable love. There is no reason. You are good, so you deserve it. The words spoken by the mother of the central protagonist in the original world are also very real. "When I see your words, I feel like my Yuan'er is still alive, really living in another world." The greatness of maternal love. I instantly understood why some mothers in reality are willing to be deceived even though they know that the person opposite the screen is not their son. This is a kind of maternal love that makes me feel as if my son is with me when I see you. This feeling is so strong. The articles I read are about empathy. I will focus on all the emotions in an article, family affection, love, friendship. I like sincere and strong emotions, no matter what kind of emotions they are. I like to immerse myself in this emotion and experience the world of the protagonist of the novel firsthand, as if I have lived my whole life again. Overall, it's a pretty good article. I hope the author can keep up the good work and continue to update. It's a bit unreadable. I love you so much, the author [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [love] [love] [love]

One Story is indeed very beautiful, the writing is delicate and the description is spot on. It is a rare masterpiece. The only shortcoming I feel is that after reading more than ten chapters now, I don't feel the gentle side written in the character. The pervert does feel it. I hope he slaps me in the face hard later (laughs) Examples of defense: During the period of taking a medicinal bath, when the stress is severe, the reaction of the attacker is: "Why didn't you tell me earlier?" To "You wasted my time" to "I don't care about you." Maybe my requirements for "gentleness" are too high, and I think this reaction is closer to "sense of responsibility" and "rationality" than to the empathy and care that "gentleness" can induce. If gentleness is interpreted as the attacker being injured but not feeling uncomfortable, it is reasonable but ultimately misses the point.

The little scorpion is so cute, so cute, wow, so cute, so cute, ahhhh, so cute, so cute, sassy and cute, so cute, I dragged a bowl to use as a bathtub, it's so cute, hahaha [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The world view and background are similar to those of ordinary Zerg novels, so little ones can watch it with confidence. One thing I like very much is that it is a psychological tortuous process that I liked from the beginning, rather than an embarrassing love-at-first-sight drama. The protagonist Gong talks about things when he wants to, and he shows no mercy to those who have humiliated the protagonist before. In my opinion, the author's two chapters of slap-in-the-face writing were okay. It was indeed a little bit satisfying, and it was much better than the ordinary humiliation and bearing the burden. Now that we've talked about the advantages, let's move on to demining. The protagonist's attack started because the protagonist's younger brother didn't want to marry the protagonist, and the protagonist took his place. Brother Gong planned to drug Shou at the banquet held by Brother Gong. Moreover, Brother Gong had humiliated and played with a lot of females before, but in the end he was easily cleared, and he used the excuse that you were young and ignorant, which I thought was outrageous. Overall, this book is very good. The author's writing style describes emotions fluently. Looking at some of the author's speeches, I feel that the author must be a very lovely person. Except for the above-mentioned points I made (I didn't read it again), if you don't mind, this book is still worth buying.

This is the second novel about Zerg that I have read. When I finished the first one, I searched for a Zerg novel for a long time and could not finish reading it. This novel can be said to be an unexpected surprise. The character creation is very successful. From the protagonist to the little characters like Kaka, they all have their own characteristics. The plot is not very ups and downs, but it is not exciting either. I think it's too plain. Gong is a guiding lover (I prefer to say salvation). Shou is very sensitive but will also respond to Gong actively and will not let Gong feel tired in this relationship. Gong will care about big and small things about Shou. He will also take the initiative to discover when Shou is insecure and overly sensitive and guide Shou to express himself. For Shou, Gong is redemption and hope. It is a beam of light that shines on the barren land, but it is not the same for Gong. In this novel, Da Da has written about things that other authors have not noticed, such as the mother in real life, the original brother who was distorted due to social reasons but awakened because of his female father. These are all things that surprised me. I hope the author will work hard and give this book a soul (This is my first time to write a long review, if there are any bad things, please pretend I didn't see it, thank you) To add - I've always read quick-travel books before, because I couldn't read a whole book, but after reading this one I feel like I can do it again, so I'm going to read another big book, wish me good luck

He deserves a high rating. There are only more than 60 pictures now. I have read them all. I feel that I can now analyze the protagonist and the two of them. Asa is a tough guy on the surface but actually timid and fragile in his heart. He longs to be loved. Although he has big psychological problems and he is afraid of many things because of the sequelae of the trauma he suffered when he was a child. But his strength should not be underestimated, so he will go crazy and say that he is facially paralyzed, but he will show his face in front of the person he loves. A little emotional, although maybe he seems to have a little social fear. Being locked up in a house for a long time, maybe that house is his tomb in this life, so he has a little social fear. He expects to be loved and will love others. He knows that he will not repeat the same mistakes. I love you, I love you, you are a cute little pussy (*/㉨＼*) Face covering Ji Yuan is a doctor. He has a bit of a shady character but is extremely indifferent but kind and gentle. Maybe it's because he is a doctor. He is very gentle to his partner and a guiding lover. He will never let his lover go back to that quagmire. He will let his lover stand up and fight this unfair world with him. I really like his setting. I am not here to save you, I am here to love you. They are each other's salvation. I hope he can be as free as a dandelion, as warm and glorious as a Gloriosa, as charming as a peony. I am dizzy and bless you with all the good words in the world. You are the incarnation of all the good words in the world, and all the good incarnation blessings are flowing to you. ---Asa Ji Yuan, your love for Asa is like the square of cosine and the square of sine. I hope you can maintain this passion until it lasts forever. One day, you will run towards the light, your future, which is just ahead. You love each other, he loves you, just like an astilbe, willing to love forever, you and him are equally indefinite. ---Ji Yuan Asa! You have to believe that there are still many people who love you. Come on, live a brilliant life and make those who hate you miserable! Let those who have punished you rot in the mire forever! Witness how great you are, and witness that you will always be admired standing in the light. ᵎ(•̀㉨•́)و ̑̑ Come on You can't lose to anyone who loses

I like this book very much. It is a sweet and healing book. It gave me a very good feeling after reading it. 1. The emotional content of this book is very delicate. When Ji Yuanyuan and Asa Baozi are together, it just feels natural and there is no abruptness at all. The relationship between xql is really sweet, super sweet [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][shy][shy][shy]. 2. The plot lines in this book are also very complete. There are foreshadowings and all the foreshadowings have been filled in [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart]. 3. I really like the character design of the protagonist in it, I really love [send heart][send heart][send heart]. Ji Yuanyuan is really gentle and reliable, and it seems that he grew up in a loving family (Ji Yuanyuan's parents love each other very much, and they taught Ji Yuanyuan very well [heartfelt]). Therefore, Ji Yuanyuan is also very good at loving people. He can discover and understand Asa's negative side and will not ignore Asa's emotions. Even if he doesn't know what happened, he will coax Asa if he is not in the right mood. He really responds to everything [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]. I really raised baby Asa very well [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]. Asa Baozi lives in a Zerg world full of shackles. Even though he was born into the royal family and has dazzling military achievements, he is still plotted and slandered. If Ji Yuanyuan had not come, Asa Baozi might have died as a genius due to rumors. Fortunately, Ji Yuanyuan came to rescue Asa Baozi [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart], and Asa Baozi also broke away from the shackles and realized his own value [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]. Asa Baozi also loves Ji Yuanyuan very much and has overcome the selfishness in love. I really wanted to cry to death when Asa Baozi was about to let Ji Yuanyuan go home. Because I love you, I am willing to overcome my nature [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]. 4. What I like most about this book is that it is my favorite redemption text, and it has reached the level of redemption in my heart. I love you because I really care about you and will not ignore any of your emotions. Even if I don't know why you are sad, I will make you happy and let you talk about it and solve it together, and I will help you untie your knot. It is me who loves and protects you from the same height as you. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] Instead of trying to save you with a superior attitude, I brought you warmth and pain. The feeling it gave me was that one kind of pain turned into another kind of pain. Of course, everyone has different opinions. After all, there will be a thousand Hamlets for a thousand people. I just expressed my own feelings about the redemption text [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]. 5. The whole book has a strong visual sense and is super cute [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [fly kiss] [fly kiss] [fly kiss] 6. This author is really alive [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]. He also said that Asa Baozi is an Internet liar. In fact, the author is also like you [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]. The author really knows how to read comments, read paragraphs, and give likes, so he caught someone alive. @ [ Send heart ] [ Send heart ] [ Send heart ]. Finally, I really recommend reading this sweet little article. It's sweet but not brain-burning, and it's worth reading. Hahaha, this is my first time to write a review. It may be a bit messy. Please forgive me if I have any questions. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] There should be one more line break, but now the text here seems a bit crowded [cover face][cover face][cover face]

Wow, the writing style of this article is very unique and delicate. The characters are vivid on the page, as if Ji Yuan and Asa are a match made in heaven. The emotional line is particularly soothing. It is not that you fall in love out of nowhere, but the kind that breaks into people's hearts step by step. Ji Yuan gives me a very different feeling. He has personality, temper, and likes some new and unusual things. His golden eyes and black hair initially gave me the impression of a dragon. Once he catches something he likes, he will never let go. When I saw Asa being loved, I felt that Hart was weak. He had been hurt too much by the world, so he built a thick protective shell for himself, like a hedgehog. But once the soul is loved, the flesh and blood will grow crazily. Asa stood in the rain for a long time, and finally waited for the person who held an umbrella for him [crying] I will always be touched by the redemption text (self-feeling). Please bring happiness to Ji&Sa.

It's the first time I'm following a serialized novel, and I feel a little surprised that it suddenly ended in a hurry. I can tell that the author was a little tired of writing in the later period, but overall it's still very interesting. It's a very cute redemption story. The guiding lover Xiao Yuan from the earth meets the possessive little Scorpion who lacks security. Xiao Yuan is redeeming Ah. At the same time, Sa also found the love of his life, a young couple who dotes on each other and loves each other. I think it has a bit of a love-loving and submissive flavor, and the writing is also very delicate. The only imperfection may be that the later period is a little watery, and the ending is relatively sudden. But I look forward to the teacher's next book. Xiao Yuan and Asa will be happy forever.

It's really good. I've read this type of novel before, and most of them stopped reading after a few chapters, but this one was the only one that made me read it from the beginning without skipping a page. Asa is really cute, but his childhood was really pitiful. Ji Yuan is also very good. He guides Asa step by step and makes Asa return to normal. When Asa is in a bad mental state, he can also pay attention to it and guide it correctly, ahhh! ! Hope they can be happy forever! ! Moreover, each character has his own personality and is an independent individual. The writing is really great! ! ! This book is worth it! ! !

After recently reading a Zerg novel, Lili Luoluo recommended many books, and I couldn't find any other themes. I read it with my old hands and felt that the books were basically the same. When I saw this book yesterday, I didn't have any hope. I just added it to the bookshelf and accidentally opened it. I was a little interested after reading the introduction, but I didn't have any hope and just passed the time to read Chapter 1. The continuity seems a bit over the top, and it gives me the feeling that the characters have distinct personalities and the story is novel. Having a knife is very sweet, and the emotional and career lines are developing well. 37. Moreover, the author's writing style is very smooth and transparent, without any awkwardness. To me, this is a worthwhile place to read. Suddenly he said something trivial and felt very superior. Asa, who has been reborn and polished, does not care about everything in the outside world, nor does he care about himself. But it will be sad, but it will also be happy. Jiyuan. It was redemption for him. Since I didn't like it blindly, I didn't see much of it when I first started watching it. Only later did I realize that this was a foreshadowing, as Ji Yuan saved his benefactor. He saved his life, and he was willing to spend his life for love.

The relationship between Asa and Ji Yuan is very pure. The author writes about their daily life and interactions as if they were natural. In particular, Asa's tail hook is very cute. The originally cold giant scorpion can't help shaking its tail hook because it likes Ji Yuan. It's really cute. Ji Yuan is like the sun warming Asa, helping him heal his illness, and guiding Asa out of the dark corners of his emotions. The author's big writing has a clear structure, the storyline is closely connected, and the writing is natural and smooth, which makes me enjoy reading it.

It's very good-looking. It's not a cool novel with crazy plot routines. It's an emotional flow with a very, very comfortable rhythm. It's very good-looking. The pure love warrior fell to the ground. And we do what we need to do without any delay. The cannon fodder that has appeared so far not only provides entertainment but also enriches the character of the protagonist. I am really impressed. This book is so comfortable to write. I hope that the subsequent plot can also resist the author. ✨✨✨There is such a comfortable emotional drama, and the rhythm of the plot is not bad at all. It is so good. It is the first such comfortable and high-quality BL novel I have seen on Tomato. I am so happy😭😭😭

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh the writing is very good, very good! ! It's not the usual simple "No male insect has ever treated a female insect like this". The female insect fell in love with it instantly. The logic is very good. The experience of Asa really made me angry. All in all, it is highly recommended!

Wk, it's really beautiful. I haven't seen such a beautiful article in 🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅🍅 for a long time. (Let me talk about my preference in reading books: Shuang Jie, Shuang Qiang. The writing style should be good, the logic should be clear, and both sides should have a long talk. To be honest, I am actually a bit controlled, but I really like this article.) This is really a redemption article + a sweet article. Reading the whole article, the author's writing style really poked me. It was Xiao Sa who made me really feel sorry for him. The baby suffered so much [crying][crying][crying][crying], and the background of the Zerg novel is that the male worm has a high status (no way, the background of this subject is like this, and this may not be particularly friendly to extreme control). In addition, this article is really very good. I hope everyone will not miss it [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] Finally, the author will write it faster and faster! ! ! !

One word is good, two words are very good, three words are very good... In short, it is good (blame my inability to speak, I can't find a good word to describe it, and I suddenly suffered the disadvantage of being uneducated...) In short, Asa is a cute silver-white scorpion, and Ji is a bit like a boring doctor who traveled from modern times to a world similar to interstellar literature... This is not the first time I read this type of article, but I feel that I can't find a meal replacement after reading it (currently). I highly recommend it to everyone. The author would like to support you for more updates. I will follow you later. ٩(๛ ˘ ³˘)۶♥

Baby Ji Yuan is so good. He guides Asa out of the cage step by step and brings Asa new life, hope and light. Ji Yuan tolerates all of Asa's shortcomings. He loves Asa and knows that Asa has no sense of security, so he is willing to stay with him and accompany him. Two lonely souls redeem each other in darkness. When a guiding lover meets a lover worthy of his companionship and protection, Asa is also willing to open his heart, accept and love his lover. Both are good babies

I finished reading it carefully, and overall it was pretty good. I was mainly attracted by the character of the protagonist, and I love watching pure love that goes both ways. The author's writing style is more literary and artistic, while also following the stream of consciousness. Personally, I prefer the direction of the story in the first half, which is relaxed, interesting and healing. The plot in the second half is a bit sadistic. Although I think it is okay, as long as it is not emotionally sadistic, I can accept it, but it is the kind of sadism caused by character flaws, which makes me sigh helplessly. Furthermore, it is a bit too fast to defeat the villain, and the logic cannot be too elaborate. The golden finger is large, so it can be read as a cool article~

Author, will your article really be more complete? You really won't stop updating and abandon it, right? I really need this kind of article to heal my soul. Overall, this article is very special. It is different from any other type I have seen before. The interaction between the two people is very sweet, but not boring, and it does not make me feel so spoiled. As soon as I started reading, I saw some fragments of daily life, some small blessings in life, and the writing style. I really like the light narrative sense. I have caught up to the latest chapter. It can really be seen that the author has written this book very carefully. Can I ask the author how many thousands of words this book will cost? Because I feel that the story so far can only be called the beginning, and at most it has entered a transitional stage. I may have to stock up on articles, because if I catch up on updates, it is easy to forget all the process (´-ωก`), but the author, please don't forget that there are readers who are always supporting you! ! ! Let's talk about the contents of the book. Up to now, Gong has been trying to save Shou. Shou is sick and has a serious heart disease. I think Gong is very powerful and reliable, but Shou is the bravest one. I have always felt that I am not afraid of being sick, because getting sick is because there is no one around who can pull you. What is scary is that you are not willing to hold on to the person who can pull you tightly. No If you are willing to go up, the disease will not be cured. In Shou, I really saw a person huddled in a dark corner. Because someone else gave him a beam of light, he ran desperately after the light. The further you run, you will find more flowers, the sun is brighter, and you are farther and farther away from the darkness. The help of others is just a lead. Salvation always requires you not to give up on yourself. Finally, I think the author can dig deeper into how he interacts with Gong if Shou is cured of his illness, because looking at it now, it is more about Gong favoring Shou, but a healthy relationship cannot be about one party's contribution alone, and it must also be seen that Shou never gives up and shines brightly.

It's really beautiful. I can see the fine grain. It's so rare. Especially this kind of Zerg writing is different from other templates. The author is so awesome.

Teacher, the writing is very nice, but the update is a bit slow. It's only the eighth chapter [face covering]. The protagonist's character is quite interesting to me, but it's not enough! I am looking forward to the future development more and more. Teacher, you are really too slow to update. You are the only author I follow now. I am waiting for you. [Sending my heart]

Up there, there was no way to stop. When I looked at the resume, I thought it was some kind of slow-burn erotic novel. When we were not familiar with each other at the beginning, we started to treat each other as brothers. I was hazy about my feelings and then put it off for a long time. After reading: Hold the grass, what kind of sweet story is this? Call me my wife, treat illnesses, kiss, coax, and hold people. (Thank you for the invitation, I have been stunned by the sweetness) It's so cute, especially because the protagonist is very enlightened and is willing to approach his wife consciously to enlighten and help her. It's full of warmth. It's so good that I've almost finished watching it, and there will be more from Mrs. Modo Mo! !

It's a very interesting Zerg novel. I saw the inseparable love between Ji Yuan and Asa, I saw Asa's dependence on Ji Yuan, and I saw Ji Yuan's meticulous care and consideration for Asa. So, authors, please hand over your manuscripts! 5 A day is not a dream!

It's really beautiful. The super sweet little scorpion

This is the first time I read this genre, and I never dared to read it. I think the teacher's writing is really very interesting. There is no misunderstanding between the two people, and even if it is solved in about two chapters (it is so enjoyable), the character is really great. Ji Yuan's character is simply amazing. Before he was determined, he was very individual, respectful and medically virtuous. When he decided to take action, he became more gentle. Loving each other means defending all due rights. Both of them care about each other very much and trust each other unconditionally.

It's very interesting. I like their bond. It started out because of two people (Chong). They are really good, a person who is willing to take responsibility and does not run away from it, and a beautiful insect who has hardly felt love and curled up in his own world but has pure and soft feelings. Their relationship is gradual, a match made in heaven, and everything comes naturally. It's not just a favor for the sake of being favored by a superior, but I really feel sorry for him and like him, so I want to hold him in my hands, for fear of not loving him enough, for fear of wronging his lover. But he was also very happy when he was giving, because his wife was also very vital, and it was not just most Zerg Wen Gong who liked Shou and had no bottom line to treat him well. It was just Gong who highlighted his own 1v1 and weakened Shou's shining points, and seemed to be just a vassal puppet. I love Asa so much, okay? Our cute little Scorpion, the love-hungry paranoid baby, you and your husband are a perfect match. Sorry, I haven't written a review for a long time. The wind kissed Kuya with willfulness, and Asa was kissed freely. However, I was severely criticized for not finishing the article [punch out] [full]

I've finished reading it ꒰ *•ɷ•* ꒱I really like this book. I'm sorry for being so late, but I've followed it from the serialization to the end! ~ Speaking of which, this is the first Zerg book I have read. During the serialization period of this book, I also read other books, but none of them were completely read. It felt like it only touched my sexual fetish but failed to attract me. But this book is different, I read it from beginning to end [shy] It was this book that made me aware of the Zerg setting for the first time and gave me a novel feeling. You must be very confident, because the writing is really great. When I see Asa go from being world-weary to cheerful at the beginning, I always lament how great love is [I almost cry] Baby, you are really good at writing. The story between Asa and Ji Yuan also moved me very much [love] [love] [love] So I still ask everyone to persevere for the people and things you love ⸜(๑'ᵕ'๑)⸝⋆* I love everyone in front of the screen and the author. I hope you all have a happy three-dimensional life and be happy every day! ∗︎˚(* ˃̤൬˂̤ *)˚∗︎ Of course, I also love the protagonists such as Asa and Ji Yuan behind the screen~ I hope you will always be happy in the place where we can't see, and your love will last forever °˖✧︎◝︎(⁰▿︎⁰)◜︎✧︎˖° By the way, I wish us in the third dimension and them in the first dimension a happy Mid-Autumn Festival! [Shy][Love] ——2025.10.6

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It's just too little! It feels so sweet, and they solved the misunderstanding in a short time without delaying another chapter. If the other party is in danger, he can immediately come to interrupt and stop it, instead of procrastinating and abusing the protagonist, which makes me heartbroken.