I Raised a Yandere Heroine, but She Keeps Coveting Her Master

It looks like a beginner's writing style, but the plot is well-developed, at least it's very much to my liking. I hope the author continues to hone their writing skills so they can bring me an even better experience. Love you! 😘 The poison hit me so badly I was blown away. I've never seen anything like it before. It was awful.

I read the latest chapter in one day. The most discussed criticism is that the male lead is controlled by the system and forced to follow the plot, such as slapping the female lead, speaking rudely, and digging out her spiritual roots. However, the story doesn't make this aspect particularly disgusting (it doesn't feel unbearable to read).

I've seen a lot of comments criticizing the male protagonist, who's manipulated by the system and unable to change things despite wanting to. I agree, but I think the protagonist has no choice. He's forcibly controlled if he doesn't follow the plot, and if he tries to break character, he's eliminated by the system. Even the world could collapse, and his apprentice could die.

Please, just one more chapter, I can't take it anymore. Please, brother, I feel ants crawling all over me, I'm shaking uncontrollably, I can't breathe. Please, brother, just one more chapter, just one more, I promise I'll never touch this again, please, brother, really, just one chapter, I swear I'll never touch this stuff again, I just can't take it anymore, I'm tossing and turning and can't sleep, brother, I'm begging you!

To me, the system seems to be on the female lead's side, or perhaps it's an incarnation of the female lead, rather than a proper system. The plot is quite good. As for the protagonist, she's slightly saintly, but not truly so. Also, regarding the realms, I finished reading but didn't see the realm divisions. What realm did the protagonist reach?

You can quit after chapter 29; I can't be the only one suffering from this.

I love watching this kind of story where the female lead is tormented, and I love the cold and ruthless male lead. Others may not like it, but I do, so keep it up! Everyone says the male lead is a puppet of the system, but I think the system's manipulation is pretty good. His cold and ruthless character is reasonable; wouldn't it be better if he stabbed the female lead a few more times? That would make her see his coldness and ruthlessness even more. This setting is great! 🤔

This book is much better than other books about yandere or master-disciple relationships! More importantly, it's not mindless! Not mindless! Not mindless! It's well-structured and clearly organized! I'll say it three times because it's important!

Sigh, I've finally finished reading it and understand it now. The story revolves around two female protagonists from different worlds. One is raised by the male protagonist, while the other is raised by the original owner of the body. The original owner's pet, while browsing through different worlds, sees herself being raised by the male protagonist and falls in love with him.

The author's plot development is incredibly immersive, drawing the reader in effortlessly each time. This, however, gives me a sense of unease and fear towards the female lead from a third-person perspective; it just makes me feel a chill down my spine. (Currently reading up to chapter 16)