The Top Player Returns, but as a Bard

The writing is actually very good, the content is very novel, and the character of the protagonist is also very interesting. The current direction of the plot is also very exciting. The storyline has the desire to keep people watching, and it will make people look forward to the subsequent plots. However, the swearing is not very interesting. The swearing does not bring any enrichment to the characters. It will only make some readers feel uncomfortable. Swearing is not necessary. It feels very unqualified, and to be honest, swearing is of no use. I feel that if there were no swearing, I would have given it five stars.

The content is very comfortable to write, but the opening scene of Xia Shi is very ambiguous. I took another look at the introduction and said there is no heroine. Well, I hope that's true, but the story is really okay.

There aren't enough people to rate it, so I'll make one myself. Well, I know that my writing is not perfect, and I am not very experienced in writing. There are always areas where my writing is not good enough, a bit toxic, etc. I will adopt everyone's good suggestions in the book review, learn from experience, and make my next book better! ᕦ(ò_óˇ)ᕤ I didn't mean to stop writing this book. I will definitely finish it! !

It's coming, it's chapter 203, there will be spoilers The writing really got better and better after that. It can be seen that the author is making progress. I feel that the author's writing style has a serious sense of humor. Mu Yunqiu really has the temperament of a fun-loving person [laughing]. He is so pure and sinister. The part about amnesia is really cool. In fact, I feel that the profession of bard is not very reflected, mainly using illegal players [Thinking] (In fact, the child came for the profession in the first place) and then it basically revolves around becoming a god. I feel that the ending is a knife. My sister is also very charming... In fact, I didn't mention it much later, and there is no such thing as losing my mind because of my sister's affairs (I feel that many people can't see this kind of thing about my sister, just for this reason, if not, please don't scold me) Mu Yunqiu is really a good nanny [laughs evilly] If you like to bang CP, you can come (I'm sorry, I regret it) Actually, right now, I'm a little confused about the names, especially those gods and the people in the Ashes Court. Keep up the good work [note]

The current content is all great! I like the character of the protagonist very much, the characters of the others are also very three-dimensional, and the writing looks very smooth and comfortable! The key is that everyone has a brain! The series of calculations and games are very exciting to watch! It's rare to pursue a new book like this, so I hope you won't stop updating w. [Sending my heart]

It took me two days to read it. It really has no CP and it is not a cool novel. The protagonist is very good and has a very cool and cute face. The main feeling is that the group portrait has super powers, which is slightly different from the editing. There is a little frustration at the beginning, but overall it is very good-looking. It keeps the main line and has a strong sense of compactness. It is one of the few books I have read without skipping chapters. Xiaomu is particularly cute🥺 I feel so bad that I can't find a meal replacement😣

Super pretty! ! ! It's one of the few novels I've read in original form on Tomato! ! I usually read a lot of novels but only read the beginning and then stopped reading. This one really attracted me [I love it] and the plot is very interesting from the end. After Mu Yunqiu got the game rights, he kept trying to kick his friends out of the game, and his friends also tried to find a way to get back into the game. It was really interesting! ! !

The writing is good, the characters are well created, they all have brains, and the world background is quite interesting [Chigua]

Really good-looking, unlimited flow of good articles, the author should not run away

I just hope that the update can be stabilized. After all, this kind of feeling is a bit like unlimited streaming. Some people may forget about the previous plot because of something for a while and then don't want to watch it. It's normal to have low data without enough word-of-mouth accumulation. People who start with unlimited streaming basically only become famous in the later stages or even after the completion. Calm down, the rhythm of the plot is really good.