I Transmigrated to a Fishing World and Awakened the Divine Fishing System

Overall, what I wrote is actually not that good. Many settings of the plot and characters are not in place, and there is still a lot of room for improvement in the language. At the same time, I hope you can give me some suggestions and get your support! If nothing happens to this book, I will continue writing it. Thank you readers for reading! ! !

I have been thinking about writing a long review before, but I haven't read it carefully. I really can't just write it out. I will put a five-star here first and wait for time to expand it (? Updated 2025/1/22 The unsurprising unfolding introduces the main characters and main conflicts in the early stage. However, the social background is not given enough space to explain clearly. I hope that this can be completed in the following pages, rather than leaving the task of completing the background to the reader. (First three chapters) In these three chapters, the main purpose is to lay down the foreshadowing and make the protagonist group seem to take shape. At the same time, a public enemy of society, tilapia, is presented to complete the special rationality of the fisherman in this world. As for the numerical value, it quickly expanded rapidly (it is not difficult to find out by comparing the changes in fishing points in Chapter 6 and previous chapters with Chapter 7). We only need to understand the system as a tool for the author to intervene in the normal development logic of the plot when necessary. (As of the first six chapters) I won't comment too much on the usual plot development formula (crisis-resolution). After all, the difference between writing a novel and going to a factory to drive screws is no longer very big. If you want to produce a large number of acceptable products in a short period of time, you must base it on a standardized production model. What is more worth pointing out is that, as a novel about fishing, "The God of Fishing" has very little description of the technical operations of fishing. The fishing shown by the protagonist is more like a magic battle in which both sides talk about it. Before unexpected and reasonable breaking points appear, this mode can easily make readers feel bored and abandon the book. Of course, there are many readers who care more about the character's life, psychological activities, combat power, etc. Than focusing on these minutiae. So at this point, we can say that the fishing process should only serve as a guiding line for this purpose, focusing the audience's eyes from the fishing line and the caught fish to the characters, preferably to the up and down lips. But such a scene is too monotonous. In the comment area, a reader friend said it very well. His general idea was that the description of fishing was too hasty and the scenes that should be ignited could not be ignited. This is actually the inevitable result of the author's writing focus. The plot is promoted through dialogue, while the actions are left alone and beautiful in each small garden. This allows the dialogue to take up too much space in some chapters and compress others. We can also notice how the author tries to make fishing happen. He makes the character work hard to defeat something to reach the ignition point. In the middle of releasing the magic, there are interspersed with the cries of others and self-doubt, and then, in the final determination, all negative elements and fish biting the thread are "exploded". This confirms what was mentioned above that the author's success does not depend on the fishing technique itself. We can also write a paragraph like a cat trying to save a tiger's land: "Kong Jun stared at the abyss-like water: it was so calm. In this place where the miasma was thick, there was no movement of small or big fish. This was really weird. "'I've long heard that Mr. Kong's fishing skills are first-rate, how can you just grab something from the pond at your fingertips?" Boss Wang, who had been standing aside for a long time, said with a smile. "Kong Jun frowned. He believed in himself and the weathered bamboo pole in his hand. "You guys stand back, I'm going to start." Kong Jun sprinkled the first handful of bait and said seriously. "..." "There was no movement after the pole was thrown down. People around him were waiting anxiously. Kong Jun's hands trembled slightly. He vaguely sensed something was wrong. The turbulence under the water was definitely not what everyone thought! "What a strong pull! The sudden pull made Kong Jun run on the ground for a few steps before he stabilized, and the lake in front of him was rippled by hundreds of feet of waves. "'Be careful of the impact!' The onlookers all around retreated one after another, leaving only Kong Jun standing at the front. "The waves rushed toward the shore like wolves and tigers, as if they were determined to knock Kong Jun to the ground. "The white waves were roaring, and no one could see clearly what was happening in and around the lake - it was already a stormy sea. "Kong Jun's feet were stuck in the mud, and he closed his eyes tightly, feeling the strength of his hands. 'Fly fishing at Dushan Pavilion!' He exerted force suddenly, and the rod suddenly bent to a sharp angle, making a creaking sound. "Kong Jun already knew who he was facing, and he had to make a quick decision. He couldn't afford it. "The fish was still tumbling in the water, and the hand holding the pole had unknowingly been twisted to the limit, and the twisted muscles showed a blazing red color through the skin. "Kong Jun opened his eyes and stared straight at the huge waves coming towards him, 'Hee hee, I can't lose!' "'Come again! Fly fishing style two!' In short, it is similar to the format above. But sometimes if we think about it carefully, this is not entirely the fault of the author. On the contrary, it must be more of the blame in today's online writing market where quantity is king. Based on the above, I will supplement it later by combining it with the novel text.

When you update, the subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be magnified. Astringent will cause complaints of illness. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the plot progresses Exhibition is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise starts to sound, and the dead numbers are collected. Volume begins to decline. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voice of praise will The sound became louder and louder. When you were at the tenth watch, the scholar's debate was deafening, and his tolerant attitude was deafening. The degree is implemented internally and externally. When you are twenty, the bookworm's memories have a place for you, that is Even in a long life, your name will leave a dazzling mark traces. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of them The problem all comes from insufficient updates.

The writing is good, but it's a pity that the fishing process is written too fast, and it feels a bit urgent. If it could be optimized, it would be perfect. It will give you a sense of refreshment, otherwise it would look a bit bland. What's going on? Why are you starting to exploit the protagonist now?

There's a book about fishing guys! Come on!

Very good, I like watching fishing guys. This is very worth watching. The only shortcoming is that the author is short and weak.

Okay, I give you five stars, not for anything else, but because you saved crazy friend Diao and his daughter and made up for my regret at the time. Five stars for you. It's not enough to read. The author should update it more. How long does it take to read this little bit?

Can you please stop being so impatient hahaha Hahaha, there are so many, it's really uncomfortable to listen to the book

I didn't expect that there is a book about this animation, five stars support. I'll give you a big reward right away.

I want to create a character for my fishing method