Slay the Gods: Editing the Narration, Starting with Hong Ying's Breakdown

As the same author of the God-Slaying fanfic, I finally know where I am lacking. I have only read the third chapter but have never closed my mouth. This kind of novel has a very strong sense of emotion. I hope that one day I can achieve the author's writing style. This is the kind of imaginative article I want to write. I have learned from it [Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript]

It's okay, just add Xiao Nan to the harem. Anyway, Xiao Nan is alone in the back, and the protagonist's strength can be improved quickly. Otherwise, how can we kill the gods?

This narration edit is incredible, the main character is actually wearing it, which is rare. In the author's writing, Hongying is a perfect match for the protagonist. It would be better if Xiaonan could be added.

How to say it. For me, a person who has only heard of God Killing, this book is quite to my liking. The plot is full of laughter and passion, and the emotional lines are also just the right embellishment (I want more heroines, more heroines, more heroines, more heroines (random thoughts)) (Okay, let's just follow the author's own outline. If not, I won't do anything. At most, I'll just cry or something (bushi)) OK, back to the topic. I really like the charisma of the protagonist. He is not a kind person, but as an ordinary person, he has the persistence to be good deep in his heart. Hhh, I personally prefer this kind of novel about love in a supernatural world. It is not like romance novels that are too sophisticated and real to the point of stomach ache (I like to read them), nor are there any love elements in battle novels (I also like to read them). The emotional lines of this book are not too unrefined, but it is okay. It is what a moderate person like me likes to read (

Can you tell me how many female protagonists there are? Not too much, just the popular actress Jasmine Nix.

It's pretty good, but the protagonist doesn't use the narration system well. It's a very invincible system, but even the basic narration modification can change "injure the opponent" to "kill", and some forbidden virtual worlds are also invincible after the modification, but they are not changed. Maybe it's to not be so invincible, but the content is very good. I give it a five-star rating. Um, looking at the back, to be honest, this CP feels too much. Although it's okay for fans to dismantle CPs, they can't dismantle all original CPs and let the protagonist have the harem alone. Besides, it's really meaningless to dismantle the official CP after dismantling other supporting characters 🤦.

This is really good-looking. I have never seen God-Slayer before and I can relate to it. The character of Hong Ying is shaped like Yun Ying in Glory of Kings. The protagonist is so strong. Can it help improve her strength? Give her a token of love.

… How should I put it, before I saw another novel about multiple women, this book is considered to be relatively good in the "Zhan Shen" series. Although the writing of that book is not very good, it has multiple female protagonists, and I heard from other readers that the author seems to have made it clear that as long as it is in the original work, it does not take up the screen and is good-looking, I will basically accept it. At what point did my senses decline with this novel? The protagonists and the others went to the first class taught by the Korean instructor in the training camp. They didn't pay attention to it. They basically read at a glance, understood the general content, and then flipped through it. From then on, they felt a bit bored⊙⊙But what surprised us was that the score dropped so much? ⊙▽⊙When I read it a few days ago, it was still 9:02. It seems to be the same book, with the same cover.

I commented on this on December 20, 2024. It has been updated to Chapter 64. I have not read the original work of God Destroyer. The plot of this fanfic of God Delayer is quite attractive. After reading it, I want to know about the original work of God Delayer. I feel good about this fanfic after reading it all. I don't know what will happen next. If the writing is not good in the future, don't say I'm a bastard and don't make a history book. At least the chapter 64 did feel good to me.

It feels like the protagonist only adds instantaneous output to his upgrade, and the blue and other things are the same as those of the same level. I'm so speechless. Can you fix the bug? I feel that the entry was changed so hastily that readers are almost vomiting blood.