Bloodstained Ticket: Countdown to Survival in My Haunted Domain

People at other stations can die, and people at the protagonist station should also be able to die. Don't make the protagonist's aura so big. There is no need for the station to keep reducing its staff since the hero arrived. The plot is not bad. How many pictures did you write just now? It disappeared inexplicably

It is a short and concise piece of unlimited flow, with a good rhythm. One copy has about 20 chapters and is completely devoid of water. It can be seen that the author's world view is very large. It is a pity to end it with a hundred chapters. I really want to see the protagonist's adventure in Qiming City and other types of tracks. I hope the author can continue it next time. The characters are very three-dimensional and distinctive. The male protagonist is neither a hapless guy nor a Jiahao brother. The supporting characters are not stereotyped and have basically no poisonous points. The male protagonist and Kaka CB/CP are both quite cute. . . I look forward to the author publishing a new book soon!

Give yourself a little encouragement

Apart from the protagonist, his favorite is Kaka [eating melon]

It feels like there are so few people. So far, the writing is pretty good and interesting.

Okay, it looks great. If you keep going, you will definitely become a god.

Clear structure, organized and logical

It feels like Japanese reasoning. The plot of the copy is compact and not watery at all. I have laid a lot of foreshadowing in the early stage, and I am looking forward to the follow-up

It's very beautiful, the copy is wonderful

It's okay, the plot is okay, but the horror atmosphere feels a bit lacking. I hope the author can work harder.