The Wolf, the Snowy Mountains, and the Iris

Warm reminder from the author: There is no pretentious and slap-in-the-face routine in this book, there is no template school beauty lady who can be used as a pendant to show off the protagonist on the street, there is no cheating protagonist who is decisive and decisive... So what is this book about? It tells a pure love story about several innocent young girls who gradually establish a bond and grow up. First of all, the protagonist must be immature enough, with room for growth and gradual maturity, and must be interesting to readers (this is quite difficult, I can't guarantee it) Secondly, under their superficial personalities, the main female characters all have unknown pasts, unspoken thoughts and secret goals, which are gradually revealed as the plot unfolds. I love the feeling of peeling an onion bit by bit. (This should be able to be written, the outline and character background are ready) Finally, this book focuses on a relaxing and comfortable reading experience. The worldview is Western fantasy. I hope to write a book in which readers can remember certain characters or plots after reading it, and be interested in reading it again when they are exhausted. (People always have to have dreams) Warm reminder is over, if you are still interested, welcome to join us! ——Meeting is fate, friendship is choice, and love is uncontrollable.

@ The cat opposite the wormhole I wrote this book review with great joy. This book gave me a lot of joy and happiness, not only the ingenious design and ups and downs of the plot, but also the frequent quotations of the author's golden sentences in the article, which just hit my heart. I am more sensitive and obsessed with literature, and have my own ideas. Most of the so-called good sentences that are very popular on the Internet are not cold to me, but some of the author's words have resonated with me many times. I felt a touch of soul collision in this book, and I was very happy. Perhaps, this is the charm of literature. The interaction with words creates soul resonance. This is the resonance between the author and the reader! Words are powerful! It is indeed difficult for this book to be popular in an environment like Tomato, but I believe that there are many people in the world who love literature as much as you and I, and it will always bring them happiness. The author please continue, pick up the pen, and prove the resilience of words! Thank you so much! I stayed up all night to read it. The author is so powerful. I was shocked. I really enjoyed reading this book. To be honest.

This is my first time to rate and write a long review for a novel. I really like it. Let's talk about the overall impression first – easy to cure but not bland. The novel (at least the first volume) focuses on daily life, but it is by no means daily life for the sake of daily life. Instead, each character is gradually introduced through daily life and the secrets behind them are further explained. The growth process of the protagonist is relatively reasonable and not brainless. In addition to the growth of strength, there is also psychological growth. The characters are portrayed with flesh and blood. At the same time, the plot is not dull. The setting of "double heroines" is a big highlight. It feels that the author needs strong control. The emotional line is not too toxic at present (but it has just been unfolded, so I look forward to the future development). The main line is advancing steadily. At present, there are a lot of foreshadowings and foreshadowing. It is very exciting to look forward to the moment when the secret is revealed and the conflict breaks out. The tags chosen by the author sum up the characteristics of the novel very well. The feeling of reading is more suitable to be summarized as "comfortable". Personally, I feel that it is especially suitable to listen to the book and savor it slowly. In an era where cool articles are everywhere, this is a rare masterpiece that can make me calm down and read. The most uncomfortable part of reading so far is the personality dialogue in the two or three chapters, which feels abrupt and abrupt, mainly because it is different from the usual style of the article. Instead, it seems a bit like the author's thoughts, but it is not large. Another problem that is not a problem is that there are too many characters appearing, and there are several at one time (such as many companions at the party and the three cardinals of the church), each of which has a standard Western fantasy character name. Of course, the characters themselves are very distinguishable, but every time I read the names, I can't help but be stunned. This is also related to the fact that I read novels relatively quickly. I also want to say that some people may feel that the plot is a bit too long after reading the paragraph review. This involves the audience issue. I personally think this rhythm is very suitable. On the contrary, one chapter a day is not enough to watch hahh All in all, I strongly recommend you to at least click in and read a few chapters. I believe there will be fans who like it. The current popularity of the novel is a pity in my opinion. Finally, I would like to give a big flower to the author. He wrote so well.

I hope the author will not give up because he has not received feedback for a long time. His writing is really good. Although he may not be able to achieve results if he persists, I believe there will be more discerning people.

It's different from the traditional formula-filled cool articles. It's really good and will be popular.

After reading the first volume, I feel warm and the body spots have faded..._(:з∠)_ The plot is smooth and natural, everyday but not dull. Every sorority party is full of warm and healing atmosphere~₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑ (especially Arianna spinning around~) And the most powerful thing is the character creation. The supporting characters are portrayed with flesh and blood (hey, my Camilla), and the protagonist Aliche is even more charming, elegant, smart and confident. Who says that childhood sweethearts can't be defeated by the sky (≧▽≦) (then who can fill in the personal line of Arianna that I lack). The thing that most admires me the most is the IQ and EQ of the characters, especially Aliche and Selina. They can not only think of all the details that the readers noticed or didn't notice, and all the situations that they thought of or didn't think of, but they can also provide almost perfect coping strategies. They can be called the gods in charge of all things in ancient Greece. All in all, I go online just to watch "Wolf, Snow Mountain and Iris"🌹(*￣3￣)╭♡

Unintentionally, it is a good book, but readers who are slow to develop the plot and emotional line may not have the patience, and magic novels have less traffic on Tomato and less profit. These are the problems. I hope it can help the author, write well and I like it very much [full]

The author's Western fantasy is the kind of novel that focuses on delicate and gentle emotions, and the emotional feeling is really the confusion and determination of the protagonist chasing love... (I think of it, but I still don't dare to say it for fear that my friends will not be able to do it in the end [cry] [cool]) And then I hope to continue writing [heartfelt]

Let me briefly talk about my feelings after reading it recently. First of all, the writing is relaxed and joyful, describing the ignorant love between a boy and a girl in adolescence and the pure friendship between boys and girls, which seemed to take me back to my junior high school days, although it is slightly flawed (the writing can tell that the author is new to the industry but is very attentive). Secondly, I personally feel that it is best to introduce the power system and the mainland situation in detail first with a map (if possible). Having a map can help to understand the plot and situation. Finally, my personal suggestion is to appropriately reduce some emotional scenes and add some other content and combat details. After all, it is labeled as war and Western fantasy. Currently, I prefer light novels. Overall, it's pretty good. I'd give it 8.5 Out of 10 points. Come on, I hope you can persevere and don't worry about temporary gains and losses [blowing kiss]

Among Tomato's western fantasy novels, it's pretty good, but there's a plot near the beginning where the original personality and the time-travel personality are separated, which makes it look rather awkward. I can't stand that section, so I suggest you skip it until you get to around chapter thirty or forty, and it will get much better after that.