Villain: Saving Myself by Stealing the Yaochi Saintess as My Bride

It's obviously a good fantasy villain story, but I think it's just him. I switched to a star field story, and it feels uncomfortable to read.

The plot is confusing, the same plot suddenly seems to be disconnected; the realm is confusing, the previous part of the plot talks about a certain realm, but the next paragraph drops to a lower realm; there are a lot of typos, the sentences don't make sense and the words are inappropriate.