Pray for My Star’s Voice

If you don't know how to write essays, you can come and read this book. It has a lot of descriptions. I deleted some words and it is just an essay. It was written by a student who was suspected of being driven crazy by essays. After reading more than half of it, I finally couldn't help it. The words are too gorgeous and there are many metaphors. I will read this book if I don't know how to describe people. It's amazing. I really want to know how you came up with so many words? Too vivid. [Laugh][like]

It looks good, but it seems that the pure knight abandoned martial arts and turned to literature. These gorgeous words, metaphors and rhetoric that are longer than my life. Really, I feel like I saw the pure knight in front of me. Ah, pure beauty is everywhere [laughing and crying]

The end is also the beginning! ! It seems like a dream but not a dream, it is a collision between reality and dream! ! ! It starts with Xingchi and Qi Li There is also the happy life of the family in a parallel world; The extra story is about their experiences in the real world; Qi Li's dream can also be regarded as me traveling through time and space to see you! ! ! Qi Wo Xing's voice—listen to my ❤️ voice Pray for me to be reborn - grant me a new life

The logic is OK, the plot is OK, and the character settings are OK. The only thing I can't stand is that the piling of words is a bit too frequent, and the descriptions are obviously too redundant. Those who like to see gorgeous and barren writing can read this article.

The protagonist is very interesting, I like the plot, and I feel that the author has similar ideas to mine. Because I am not a professional writer, I just want to finish the story of the protagonist Xin Fu and write it down. Seeing the characters I created have a happy ending is very satisfying and makes my heart warm. (๑´∀`๑)

It's really interesting. You will have something to eat when you follow Chi Chi. The characters are not exaggerated and have brains. The plot is really one after another. But I am curious about who G is. I feel that the interaction between Lu Yun and Chi Chi has a different feeling. I feel that if Lu Yun wants it, it is G, but I don't think it is Chi Chi. I always feel that it will be Lu Yun's missing brother. I have a feeling that G is the one in the wheelchair in front, because there is no specific explanation at the moment, and I don't know who it is [face covering]

Now I think it's very interesting. If the plot doesn't meet the aesthetics in the future, I won't give it one/two/three stars. The worst is four stars ₍₍◝( ﾟ∀ ﾟ )◟ ⁾⁾ (only the plot is not mentally retarded). It's really interesting. If you follow Chi Chi, you will definitely get something to eat. The characters are not exaggerated and have brains. , The plot is really one after another, but I am curious about who G is. I feel that the interaction between Lu Yun and Chi Chi has a different feeling. I feel that if Lu Yun wants it, it is G, but I don't think it is Chi Chi. I always feel that it will be Lu Yun's missing brother. I have a feeling that G is the one in the wheelchair in the front, because there is no specific explanation at the moment, and I don't know who it is. [Face covering] The author will update quickly [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates]

The author is very good, he is not only gentle but also listens to "persuasion"🌚✨✨✨Personally, I feel that the writing style is not bad, I am a newbie, and the main CP and deputy CP are very easy to read! ! ! It's so refreshing to eat melon╭(ᵔ_>ᵔ)╮

I feel like the author's writing is getting better and better than before. There used to be too many rhetorical devices. It looks much better now after deleting it. Just can it be faster? Can you do two chapters a day? If it really doesn't work, it's okay to update to the end.

It's good to read, and I recommend this book~ But the author, I, ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah? Well, because you wrote it very well, why is this a dream? Why? Although it will be complete later. I watched it very well, and tears fell down when I saw the last one. What do you want? Author [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] Missed! ! ! ! ! !