Trash Spiritual Roots? The Beautiful Master Fights to Take Me as Her Disciple

On the whole, Luo Yu follows the path of a normal person and embarks on the path of God. Although the heroine and the "harem" group of unsatisfied lovers above Youda occasionally cause trouble, this also expresses the pure love and affection in human nature. Bai Yueguang's dedication and the heroine's dependence on life and death can give a happy ending.

The story is novel and interesting. It's good to watch if it has a plot. It's rich in content, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, the writing is delicate, and the ups and downs are exciting. It's very attractive. I like to read it!

Come on, author, you wrote well. It is recommended to add more emotional descriptions. There are also some funny plots. It's best to have both. You can learn from other people's chapter description techniques and writing style. I hope your book will get better and better

To be honest, I couldn't let go of it for a long time. I don't know why I suddenly thought of Su Ming, who seeks magic. Although he said that Su Ming was not as miserable, he was always treated as a pawn. To be honest, I felt that the best character created in the whole book was Ashue. I don't know why I always felt that the master was a bit uninterested. To be honest, I hope to add a side story with Ashue.

If you can't bear it, it's no longer a brain problem.

The character creation is very successful, each character has its own characteristics, the logic is clear and not bloody, there is no brainless cheating, the writing is delicate and not perfunctory, and the whole process is very smooth to follow.

Generally speaking, the novel is well written, but there are many pitfalls that are not clearly explained. The fairyland chapter feels very rushed, and the cultivation level in the later period is abnormal. Compared with the early stage, it is like a turtle or a rocket. If the fairyland chapter is polished and the ending is polished and written in more detail, the impression will be better than now.

It's not easy being an author. I'm very interested in this book. Don't stop updating it. Hey! [Pout]

The characters are three-dimensional and not stereotyped, the rhythm of the plot is well controlled, there are no bugs in the logic, there is no messy bloody plot, the counterattack is very exciting, and the overall reading is very comfortable.

The characters are well described and full of emotions, worth watching