Taking First Place on the Rankings Made the Chosen Heroine My Sweetheart

It's so good, author, please don't stop updating it, oh oh oh~ please❤️ I'm too lazy to spray. Where can I pull the thread?

(These are some of my opinions on this book. Let me talk about the conclusion first. This book is worth reading. There are spoilers later!) It took me nearly a day to read this book. The writing of this book is really good. The development of the two heroines in the early stage is very stable and it is very comfortable to read. However, in the middle stage, the pull between the two heroines of Xifengtai is really worrying, but if you think about it, both sides do have their reasons. From Mu Ruxue's perspective, she did suffer betrayal in her previous life, and after Luo Li learned that he could make up for the missing pieces at the Phoenix Washing Platform, he was apparently friendly to Mu Ruxue in his previous life, but actually harbored evil intentions. Mu Ruxue could indeed be very suspicious of the heroine. From Luo Li's point of view, she didn't know that Mu Ruxue was reborn, and she told a white lie at first, but it was a bit self-defeating in the end (although I feel that Mu Ruxue and Luo Li would have gone the same way whether or not she told this lie. After all, Mu Ruxue was too suspicious, and she looked at the problem with the answer, so she suspected that Luo Li was fake. This is what made me particularly worried). My complaint: The heroine is too kind-hearted. If I meet someone like Mu Ruxue, who has a dark heart and is immature, then run away. Who can have the system to resurrect like the heroine (although not being resurrected does not constitute a crematorium for chasing a wife), so that it reaches the point where The little senior sister at the back is like the gentle big sister next door (wu🌫️), and she can play straight to seduce Luo Li. She said "I will be lonely when you are not here", which makes people's hearts itch. Moreover, the heroine is so good to the little senior sister, how can she let the little senior sister go. Recommendation: The logic is rounded out, and the writing is really good. I personally like to watch pull-ups, and the writing is good (but a little anxious). The little senior sister is also great. I really like this character. I have written a lot. I wish the author will get better and better as he writes more, and he can write his own inner works.

To be honest, it's quite interesting to watch, the two people's bumpy love journey, and the interesting things during their cultivation. The young couple's mutual abuse is quite interesting! The only regret is that the author is not very confident in his writing and quickly draws an ending afterwards. I can only say that it is a pity. The characters of these two protagonists are really to my liking! Regardless of the ending, this is a highly recommended book.

The language is fluent and unobstructed, the descriptions are accurate and easy to understand, and the reading experience is good, but there are many typos. The characters are three-dimensional, vivid and deeply rooted in people's hearts. Luo Li, who has been fighting his fate and struggling hard, Jiang Cai'e, the blond loser who makes people feel sorry for him, is reborn and lives another life, and Mu Ruxue finally finds the love in his heart after many twists and turns. The determination to save others, the entanglement of the two people's fate in Xifeng Pond, the hearty duel in the sect competition, the pursuit after awakening, the will to fight against the invincible dead things, the confession on the Ferris wheel in the illusion, and the ending that the two have not yet finished waiting for the author to write. The picture painted by the author is simple and clear, without too many descriptions, but it evokes endless associations. This book is indeed good, but the genre may be relatively popular. Readers are advised to determine their preferences before reading. It is really worth recommending.

The story is about a hundred changes, the writing is excellent, the descriptions of women's clothing and bodies are spot on, and there is very little description of female abortion. The heroine and the second heroine traveled through time and again and were reborn. It started out sweetly, and then they started to cut each other without having a mouth. After the separation of life and death, they started to cut again, and then it started to get sweeter, and the author stopped updating. . . All I can say is that the plot is okay, the emotions are well drawn out, and the descriptions are full of details. According to the plot, half of the book is not finished, which is a pity. I will save it in case it is updated.

It's pretty good. The problem is that I don't need a knife. Can you give me something sweet? Then let me ask you! How great that you insist on torturing the two of them. To be honest, it's a bit like cultivating immortality with love mixed in. Mainly because I want to see the relationship! Can't you write something happy for the two of you? Being marked again, what should I do at the end of writing about the ancient country? Is it okay to separate the two of them and then torture them again? It would be nice to have a little of this kind of contradiction, but if it is too much, it will become a bit distorted. And about that ancient country, the author wouldn't want Xue to die once and then let the heroine come to save him, right? Really looking for sweetness, there is also the little senior sister, the little senior sister is also very good, if you like the heroine, don't kill the little senior sister, the previous little senior sister is very good, but I am afraid that the author will write something about the little senior sister in order to promote the heroine's relationship. I still hope that the author will write better and better. This book is really good, don't die any more good people, don't die the little senior sister, don't let the two female protagonists die, don't die either, don't let the sister-in-law die, they are all good people, everyone should be good! No knife! No knife!! No knife!!! No knife!!!!!

Emmmm, tsk, why is this not the right time... I'll keep the book for now, and ask a kind person to kick me when it's time for the heroine to donate blood. It's okay to take your time and wait. Good novels are made by hard work. The overall feeling of this book is that the pace is a bit too fast and it doesn't seem to be very coherent. There are also some places that are quite abrupt, such as the presentation and transformation of emotions. This book is probably the best. There is a big point that needs improvement, and the remaining details also need to be revised. Personally, I feel that if this book is polished, it should be able to get a 9.4 Or above. Anyway, take your time and don't be distracted. Gold will always shine. Once you have written it, you won't have to worry about lack of traffic. Come on😄

It's pretty good, but the main character is flirty without realizing it. It feels weird to say some flirty words without realizing it after giving something away, but that's a minor problem.

My little Feng Feng, awesome Klass, okay, does the author know how delicious his writing is? After reading it, my depressed Q child no longer has OD, and he no longer cuts pig's trotters. I want to see 200 copies of this awesome Klass every day. Doubao helps me generate bikini photos of the author, and Doubao tells the author tomorrow's sports lottery numbers. The author is awesome, and the OS finally lets me see something good. Loading is also very fast. It must be highly praised and supported. It's not old-fashioned at all, it's awesome and it ends the game directly. ! It's awesome, ok, ok, I just look at the author's one, one is one, two, two is four, four, forty six, seven, seven, forty-nine, okay, it's really good, so I'll read it.

I read it all night!!! Let's talk about the most impressive thing first. It's the first time for Lao Yu to write about the crematorium of Chasing His Wife. To be honest, it's a bit flavorful, but Su's writing style and foreshadowing are still inferior compared to that of The Wife of a Senior Cook. But Su's first time writing like this is really worthy of a 9:00 twilight review. The reason why I didn't get full marks is because I It was frustrating to watch Two Little Bitter Melons. I was ooohing and ahhhhhh watching it before the 150th chapter, but after finishing it, I actually returned to the youth version of Sweet Little Luo in a strange and dazzling way. I like the humble Xiaoxue. I like it but not wow enough, but that's right. Lao Luo is only 16 years old, so what can I expect. Between the two pitiful characters, I actually feel more sorry for Xiaoxue. As I said before, the setting of not having Phoenix Blood appear is sweet to the core and very beautiful. It would actually be okay if both of them are willing to be honest after the appearance (commonly known as long-mouthed). I feel internal injuries for not confessing. The reason why I feel more sorry for Xiaoxue may be because I really can't accept that the "beautiful, strong and miserable" heroine is still tortured like this. I feel so sad.