Ranked First on the List, the Heroine Is Destined to Become a Spoiled Wife

It's so good, author, please don't stop updating it, oh oh oh~ please❤️ I'm too lazy to spray. Where can I pull the thread?

(These are some of my opinions on this book. Let me talk about the conclusion first. This book is worth reading. There are spoilers later!) It took me nearly a day to read this book. The writing of this book is really good. The development of the two heroines in the early stage is very stable and it is very comfortable to read. However, in the middle stage, the pull between the two heroines of Xifengtai is really worrying, but if you think about it, both sides do have their reasons. From Mu Ruxue's perspective, she did suffer betrayal in her previous life, and after Luo Li learned that he could make up for the missing pieces at the Phoenix Washing Platform, he was apparently friendly to Mu Ruxue in his previous life, but actually harbored evil intentions. Mu Ruxue could indeed be very suspicious of the heroine. From Luo Li's point of view, she didn't know that Mu Ruxue was reborn, and she told a white lie at first, but it was a bit self-defeating in the end (although I feel that Mu Ruxue and Luo Li would have gone the same way whether or not she told this lie. After all, Mu Ruxue was too suspicious, and she looked at the problem with the answer, so she suspected that Luo Li was fake. This is what made me particularly worried). My complaint: The heroine is too kind-hearted. If I meet someone like Mu Ruxue, who has a dark heart and is immature, then run away. Who can have the system to resurrect like the heroine (although not being resurrected does not constitute a crematorium for chasing a wife), so that it reaches the point where The little senior sister at the back is like the gentle big sister next door (wu🌫️), and she can play straight to seduce Luo Li. She said "I will be lonely when you are not here", which makes people's hearts itch. Moreover, the heroine is so good to the little senior sister, how can she let the little senior sister go. Recommendation: The logic is rounded out, and the writing is really good. I personally like to watch pull-ups, and the writing is good (but a little anxious). The little senior sister is also great. I really like this character. I have written a lot. I wish the author will get better and better as he writes more, and he can write his own inner works.

To be honest, it's quite interesting to watch, the two people's bumpy love journey, and the interesting things during their cultivation. The young couple's mutual abuse is quite interesting! The only regret is that the author is not very confident in his writing and quickly draws an ending afterwards. I can only say that it is a pity. The characters of these two protagonists are really to my liking! Regardless of the ending, this is a highly recommended book.

The language is fluent and unobstructed, the descriptions are accurate and easy to understand, and the reading experience is good, but there are many typos. The characters are three-dimensional, vivid and deeply rooted in people's hearts. Luo Li, who has been fighting his fate and struggling hard, Jiang Cai'e, the blond loser who makes people feel sorry for him, is reborn and lives another life, and Mu Ruxue finally finds the love in his heart after many twists and turns. The determination to save others, the entanglement of the two people's fate in Xifeng Pond, the hearty duel in the sect competition, the pursuit after awakening, the will to fight against the invincible dead things, the confession on the Ferris wheel in the illusion, and the ending that the two have not yet finished waiting for the author to write. The picture painted by the author is simple and clear, without too many descriptions, but it evokes endless associations. This book is indeed good, but the genre may be relatively popular. Readers are advised to determine their preferences before reading. It is really worth recommending.

The story is about a hundred changes, the writing is excellent, the descriptions of women's clothing and bodies are spot on, and there is very little description of female abortion. The heroine and the second heroine traveled through time and again and were reborn. It started out sweetly, and then they started to cut each other without having a mouth. After the separation of life and death, they started to cut again, and then it started to get sweeter, and the author stopped updating. . . All I can say is that the plot is okay, the emotions are well drawn out, and the descriptions are full of details. According to the plot, half of the book is not finished, which is a pity. I will save it in case it is updated.

挺不错的 问题就是不要刀子了 给我发点甜的不行吗？ 那我问你！多好了 你非要折磨两人 老实说 有点修仙中夹杂爱情了，主要是我想看感情啊！就不能给两人写点幸福的吗？ 又是被标记，写到最后古国这段又要干嘛！把两人分开，然后再虐一下，在和好吗？这种矛盾有一点就好了，太多了咱也会有点变扭，还有那个古国，作者不会想让雪死一次，然后让女主来救吧😄？真的 求甜的，还有小师姐，小师姐也很好的，喜欢女主就喜欢了，不要刀小师姐啊，前面小师姐塑造的很好，但就怕作者为了促进女主感情，把小师姐写的那啥了，还是希望作者写的越来越好的，这本真的挺好，不要再死好人了，小师姐别死，两个女主也别死，小姑也不要死啊，都是好人，大家都要好好的！不要刀子！不要刀子！！不要刀子！！！不要刀子啊！！！！！

emmmm，啧怎么这么不是时候…书先养着，求一位好心人到时候在更到女主献血的时候踢我一下。 没事慢慢来等得了，好小说都是磨出来的，这本总体给人的感觉就是节奏有点太急，似乎没有很连贯的感觉，还有就是有些地方比较突兀，比如情感的呈现与转变方面大概是这本书需要精进的一大点，剩下的一下细枝末节也还需再改改，个人感觉这本要是磨好了应该能上个9.4以上，总之慢慢来吧，不要心乱，是金子总会发光，写好了不愁没流量，加油[笑]

It's pretty good, but the main character is flirty without realizing it. It feels weird to say some flirty words without realizing it after giving something away, but that's a minor problem.

My little Feng Feng, awesome Klass, okay, does the author know how delicious his writing is? After reading it, my depressed Q child no longer has OD, and he no longer cuts pig's trotters. I want to see 200 copies of this awesome Klass every day. Doubao helps me generate bikini photos of the author, and Doubao tells the author tomorrow's sports lottery numbers. The author is awesome, and the OS finally lets me see something good. Loading is also very fast. It must be highly praised and supported. It's not old-fashioned at all, it's awesome and it ends the game directly. ! It's awesome, ok, ok, I just look at the author's one, one is one, two, two is four, four, forty six, seven, seven, forty-nine, okay, it's really good, so I'll read it.

I read it all night!!! Let's talk about the most impressive thing first. It's the first time for Lao Yu to write about the crematorium of Chasing His Wife. To be honest, it's a bit flavorful, but Su's writing style and foreshadowing are still inferior compared to that of The Wife of a Senior Cook. But Su's first time writing like this is really worthy of a 9:00 twilight review. The reason why I didn't get full marks is because I It was frustrating to watch Two Little Bitter Melons. I was ooohing and ahhhhhh watching it before the 150th chapter, but after finishing it, I actually returned to the youth version of Sweet Little Luo in a strange and dazzling way. I like the humble Xiaoxue. I like it but not wow enough, but that's right. Lao Luo is only 16 years old, so what can I expect. Between the two pitiful characters, I actually feel more sorry for Xiaoxue. As I said before, the setting of not having Phoenix Blood appear is sweet to the core and very beautiful. It would actually be okay if both of them are willing to be honest after the appearance (commonly known as long-mouthed). I feel internal injuries for not confessing. The reason why I feel more sorry for Xiaoxue may be because I really can't accept that the "beautiful, strong and miserable" heroine is still tortured like this. I feel so sad.