Farming and Cultivation

It's like reading an essay

I don't know that your authors are clearly writing that the protagonist has five spiritual roots and also has the golden finger of the five spiritual roots. He just doesn't give the protagonist the Five Elements exercises. They have to be single-attribute exercises. So why not just write about the Pinling Roots from the beginning.

The idea is good, but it's just a bit rusty at first, and it gets better over time. But as other authors said, it's more like reading a text, so it's better to focus on narrative and too much environmental description. They say it sounds like writing a text, but in fact, it's just water. Drinking too much water will make you weak.

Do you want to write an essay? Why are you using so many flowery words?

The four elements of Taneda style: Hidden Realm·Ultimate Attack·Ultimate Speed·Alchemy Drawing Talisman… After traveling for such a long time, the Five Spiritual Roots do not look for compound exercises, but only cultivate the wood system. Are you telling me that other spells are blessed by spiritual roots? When I got the Five Elements Tree, I didn't think about how to plant it. I barely mentioned it after I got it... Tsk. There are also some problems with the protagonist's character. He is not stable enough and lacks perspective.

I feel that overall it is not as good as "You cultivate immortality while I farm" [grievance], but it is very good on tomatoes 🍅. It suits my taste [I also strongly recommend] [Bookshelf plus one] I don't know if there will be any big poisonous points later [Thinking]

I always feel that the pig-footed personality is awkward to speak. You can be modest and humble, but there is no need to be humble, right? A pleaser personality?

Self-entertainment [love]

You can keep working hard

The content is good but there is too much nonsense and I feel like I have a people-pleasing personality.