Farming and Cultivation

It's like reading an essay.

I don't understand why you authors, who clearly write that the protagonists all have five spiritual roots and even have cheat-like abilities, don't give them five-element cultivation techniques and insist on single-attribute techniques. Why not just write down a high-grade spiritual root from the beginning?

The idea is good, but it started off a bit awkwardly, though it will get better with practice. However, as other authors have mentioned, it reads more like an essay, so it's best to focus on narration. Too much environmental description, while they call it good writing, is really just filler; too much filler will make you feel bloated.

Are you writing an essay? Why use so many fancy words?

The four elements of a farming-style game: concealing one's cultivation level, unleashing ultimate attacks, maximizing speed, and mastering alchemy and talisman drawing… After traveling for so long, you don't seek out composite cultivation techniques for those with five spiritual roots, only cultivating the wood element. And you're telling me other spells have spiritual root enhancements?

Overall, I feel it's not as good as "You Cultivate Immortality, I Farm" 🥺 but it's pretty good on Tomato 🍅 and suits my taste [I also highly recommend it][Added to my bookshelf] I wonder if there will be any major flaws later on 🤔

I always feel that the protagonist's personality and speech are awkward. You can be humble and modest, but there's no need to be subservient. Is he a people-pleasing personality?

Enjoying myself ❤️

You can keep trying.

The content is good, but too much rambling makes it seem like the person has a people-pleasing personality.