Ye Luoli: Master of Fate from the Start

A must-read for the author When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are in the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars' debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates. [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

Please support me. The most popular thing I have seen recently is the gay article [smile][face covering] I wonder when this book will be written? [What]

I've finished reading it. Yes, I finally have Ye Luoli's harem.

Well written, finally a normal one. It's just a little bit short. Is it the king's land in the whole world? Is it the king's ministers who are on the shore of the land? You have to do this, otherwise you will be stabbed in the back at some point. Collecting those fairies to your own place is very good. There are still some things that haven't been born yet and you can bring them out. That belongs to your own camp. I remember one about the Internet. It seems like it hasn't been fully born yet. Mainly because I didn't read it later. But there must be many, many anyway. I remember that the ones inside seemed to have a bit of a twin feel. Life and death. That light and dark. And what about Mengyi? I remember that they seemed to be twins. Life and death, light and darkness should be twins, and only those twins are normal. No matter if he is a twin or not, you can make him a twin. Then separate. And then there are a lot like this. Isn't that just another pile of them? And if you have the ability, the best thing is to have a world where you have absolute control over the world. You have one that can be used to develop and plunder, so that you have an absolutely safe rear. And you can keep writing. I can write for a long time. You can also go to other worlds to plunder.

To be honest, I didn't write it well But I still shamelessly give it five stars. Regarding skill introduction, it is indeed very complicated. But I think that if you don't explain it clearly, others won't be able to understand it either. After all, not everyone knows the source of this ability or its original characteristics. Secondly, these abilities do not necessarily mean that they must be used in Ye Luoli. The meaning of Wanjie means that it is not just Ye Luoli For example, in a certain loli knife world, the mecha army is directly pushed forward, so where can the knives come from? For example, in 02, let her and Darling: Guang change their fate lines and make them live a happy life, because they are quite incompatible. (Mainly because, although I like 02, 02 looks like a little dragon. Ask yourself, if you don't know anything, you can't do what Guang does. Since you can't do it yourself, there's no need to say more) For another example, Zan Tong, Teigu can be used in this world. Also, the Armor World, I think it's fun to leave it to Xiaotian or General Duanmu The protagonist himself is extremely lazy and greedy, as can be seen from the "Seven Deadly Sins: Laziness" and "Lust" It has nothing to do with him, and he usually doesn't care about it. Everything is a fun person's mentality. As long as it doesn't interfere with him, he usually doesn't care. Secondly, just because the eyes are slightly red does not mean that you are crying. Who has nothing to do but just cries with slightly red eyes? So many tears?

I watched it for more than ten hours, and it didn't jump at all. I should have a say. (I haven't finished it yet) 1. This is a male harem novel written by Ye Luoli. Most of them have been collected. It is rare in this genre. 2. The transition of the plot is quite smooth, but there is no contradiction in it. It is just too smooth. However, it is also good to read in daily writing. 3. There are too many extra skills. After obtaining the skills, they are given to other fairies. The favorability of the fairies increases and there are new skills, which is a bit tiring. 4. For example, there are too many mechas and special props, and they appear very rarely. Some of them are unnecessary and you don't need to add them. If they can be used later, just pretend I didn't mention them. 5. Finally, there is the emotional line of the protagonist. The first few (ice, time, dust...) Are pretty well written, but the protagonist in the latter part is just like a succubus, a heartthrob. I won't comment too much on this.

It's a very good work. Not only does it have a normal orientation, but the protagonist is very humane and decisive in killing. I just don't know why the rating is so low? Everything else is good, but the author doesn't update it fast enough. Come on, author.

Author, I'm very curious, if Tong Yi is so obsessed with the protagonist, why is he still obsessed with Chen Sisi?

Okay, it's pretty good. This is one of the best-looking movies I've ever seen with Ye Luoli.

Finally not bisexual anymore.