Dominating the Heavens by Collecting Perks in Yan Shuangying's World

Continue writing about the world of Yan Shuangying, and the heroine of Yan Shuangying's world

The writing is very good, but I think the plot can be changed. Since Yan Shuangying starts, why should we take the ancient route? In fact, I think it is better not to develop this kind of novel in the direction of fantasy. After Yin Shuangyin is passed, it can actually go to the city, and then develop in the direction of science fiction. I think it will look better, and the plot will be more logical.

Come on, come on, you'd better write it all out. The series "Detective Di Renjie Yan Shuangying" can be combined with his crime-solving drama. Don't stop updating it.

Maybe it's because I've read too many cool articles, and I can't see how it takes five or six chapters to kill a few people. It's not the kind of Buddhist style that makes it uncomfortable to watch.

You can write Bao Qingtian·Lotus Tower·Hot-Blooded Chang'an, Forensic Doctor Qin Ming, Forensic Doctor Qin Ming's Mind Reader, Breaking the Cocoon, let's write these first, and then post them again when I think of them [laughs][laughs]

AUV ~ 99% Rare ~ This is the first time I have seen a fanfic about the world of Yan Shuangying. The martial arts side story in the middle is probably to make the protagonist's strength stronger. When I was writing 1949, I felt that the author had really worked hard. The lines, characters, plot and logic were all consistent with the TV series. It's a pity that the later data is too poor and I haven't finished writing it yet. But that's okay, a quick ending is much better than a break. There is only a slight conflict, that is, the protagonist's force value and Yan Shuangying's force value are slightly out of balance, which will make it difficult to advance the plot. The protagonist is much more powerful than Yan Shuangying, which makes people feel a little awkward, but it is well written. Good-looking and good-looking.

It fits the plot. It just needs to include a protagonist who is more awesome than Yan Shuangying.

Except for the Wulin Gaiden in the middle, everything feels good! As for the Wulin Gaiden in the middle, I didn't watch it because I had no interest in Wulin Gaiden, so I skipped it! The updates are simply not enough! I feel like the update speed is so slow. If it doesn't work, I want to keep the book! Otherwise, it won't be enough to watch.

Very interesting, Yan Shuangying, captain of China! !

Another half-human, half-ghost guy appears in Guandong Mountain