How Embarrassing! The Male Lead’s Mind Is Wandering Again

The Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms are not enough for each of the men in Madhu's group, [awkward laughter]

The plot is very good, the pace is fast, and the chapters are short and can be read in a while. The only flaws are all these five men. They don't have particularly distinctive characteristics. It's best to write the character from the beginning. Don't portray the man as cold and talkative in the early stage. After falling in love with the heroine, his whole personality has changed. Lu is the most obvious. After he is obviously a soldier, he falls in love with the heroine. After the author writes him, he is almost like Shen, like a child... The author writes that in the later period, Lu is also described as an unreasonable boy instead of a man who does not match his military status. If Sheng pretends to be a pitiful boy abroad, I admit it. After all, I stopped pretending later. I still like Sheng's domineering character in his early years. As for the original husband Qi, I thought he was a cold, restrained and overbearing CEO. In fact, in the later period, he was also indecisive and not very attractive. He also had ulterior motives for approaching the heroine + he was entangled with the heroine. Fortunately, the heroine never really loved him, otherwise there must be a plot to abuse the heroine. I really can't stand it. In the days when I purely loved the heroine, I couldn't bear the slightest grievance of the heroine. Shang's portrayal is okay, he is a prodigal son from the bottom who has been among thousands of flowers and never touched his body. However, his scenes are pitiful. He only appears in the early stages when the male and female protagonists are entangled with the female supporting characters and in the later stages. He feels like a pure tool. And I think these five men were the ones who could best control their hearts and least love the heroine that much. It was this Shang at that time. The final ending is open-ended. In fact, I prefer to write the ending as it was at the beginning, that is, all five men follow and compromise with each other to accompany the heroine, because all five of them are busy and have their own careers. In this way, if they accompany the heroine together, there will always be someone around the heroine, which is also good. As for these five male protagonists, based on my personal attributes, I hate young puppies and like the domineering boss. The order that attracts me is Sheng>Shang>Lu>Qi>Shen.

This novel is really amazing! While reading, I was completely attracted by the world built by the author. The ups and downs of the plot gripped my heart from the beginning. Every twist and turn was unexpected yet reasonable, making me want to stop. The characters are vivid and three-dimensional, the male protagonists have distinct personality traits, and the supporting characters are also flesh-and-blood. Their stories and emotions are intertwined, making people feel for them. The author's writing style is exquisite, both in terms of environmental description and psychological portrayal. The emotions revealed between the lines are very contagious, making me laugh and cry along with the protagonists. The theme of the novel is profound. Behind the wonderful story, there are also thoughts about human nature and life. After reading it, people will have endless aftertaste and can't help but think about it again and again. In short, this is a rare masterpiece, highly recommended! Also, is it true that you can't write extras? I really want to go to Shura Field Also, Shen Kuo is a really good baby.

It's nice to watch, nice to watch, nice to watch, the story is rich, I like Sheng Huaixi and Lu Kuo, Sheng Huaixi is, uh, a parent. He pretended to be a green tea puppy for the first time, and for the second time he pretended to be a sinister black house. Then he was actually the leader of a gang of arms dealers. He was very powerful, had a small golden cage, and had all kinds of dirty talk. Hehe, I won't go into details. You can make up your own mind. Lu Kuo is a famous actor, but he and the heroine are childhood sweethearts. He likes the heroine very much, and many interesting and exciting stories happen in it. Lu Kuo has been secretly in love with the heroine since he was a child, but he never said it because of his arrogance. Later, he gradually saw his heart clearly. He knows three things, and he is the third person for love. He is easily shy, and he understands deep French kisses. Let's talk about the heroine. The heroine is also a girl with a strong career ambition. I am independent and I don't depend on boys anyway. I have a career and I like the heroine. She has a very upright personality and is super good-looking. Go check it out. This is also the longest review I have ever written. Few people have read the new book and the ratings are not enough. I hope to support the author [Love] [Love] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] [Blow kiss] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] (´∀｀)♡ The tug-of-war between Ji Ruan and several male protagonists is really exciting and worth reading. I really like the character of the female protagonist.

The five stars are for the support of the author (I think it is actually about three stars). The heroine of this book did not like it very much, and I felt quite frustrated because I read it a long time ago and clicked back to this author again, and then I came to read it when I saw a new article. The process was okay, interesting, and quite short, and it will not make people give up halfway. At the end, I felt weird (it didn't take much effort, but it came together [something])

It's pretty good. The heroine seizes every opportunity to go to the mall and make her family bigger and stronger. She has a very sassy character and doesn't stop for anyone. There are a lot of plots in Shura Field in the book, hahaha. My favorite male protagonist is Shen Kuo, a childhood sweetheart who is devoted to the female protagonist. But the heroine didn't choose anyone, so the beginning of Shura Field also ended with Shura Field. ——February 10, 2025

I thought it was a fake harem, but found out it was real. The female protagonist has a pretty good character, and the male protagonists also have their own merits. Although the overall story is relatively routine, the writing is smooth, the flaws are not hidden, and the ending is just right. PS. It's a good read. I'm looking forward to the new work.

It's good to read. I like books with big meat sauce the most. The heroine is still in the style of a heroine. She is brave and resourceful and not bothered by men. The plot is interesting but not brainless, but it is too little and not enough to read. Especially the Shura Field at the beginning is what I want to read. I support it and support it [Send my heart][Send my heart]

Ahhhhhhhhhh it's so beautiful! I really like the character of the heroine. She can enjoy it soberly without sinking. I feel that baby Shen Kuo is so cute. He is born to be a big house material. But if I really had to choose one, I couldn't choose one just like the heroine. It's true that I don't like the male protagonists that much. Even in the finale, there are still three male protagonists who didn't get to eat meat! Especially for Shen, you can't stop eating meat just because Shen Kuo is the easiest to conquer and the easiest to gain favorability, right? Author, how did you arrange it? ! Why do I sleep with one male protagonist multiple times but not other male protagonists? I thought that this kind of NPC novel would have a balance for each male protagonist. Even if there is no main plot, at least there will be a 1v1 side story. There is nothing, but the plot is really good and interesting. The part in country Z made me feel very thrilling, and I wanted to fast forward to the domestic plot, but it was so well written that I couldn't bear to skip it. It took a long time. I don't have the patience to read an article from beginning to end, and the length is still the most suitable for me (more than a hundred chapters, anything more than that feels too long and tiring to read). It's been a long time since I've seen a Shura Field NPC article that suits my taste. Why is the rating so low, but I really enjoyed reading it, and I also like the heroine's point of view. I think it's not too much to say it's a heroine article, right? Except for a little disagreement with the original heroine, there is no female rivalry. However, the heroine has no intrigues to deal with it. If she can explain it clearly, she has already made it clear, and everyone has a long mouth. However, although this book is a systematic text, the system is useless. I deserve to be complained about by the heroine often, hahaha.

Super pretty! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I want our Shen Kuo to eat meat too😭😭😭😭 Shen Kuo is so pitiful. Listening to the sound of the one I love most and others doing it, I cry to death [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]