Cultivation: Gaining Longevity by Contracting a Tortoise

It has more than 140,000 words and 23 chapters. I was stunned for a while. I haven't encountered this kind of author for a long time. The content is also very good and the style is also good. Compared with the fights and intrigues that are always caused by various reasons, this book looks very relaxed. At least I personally feel comfortable. Come on, author.

Family affection can turn into love. In my opinion, it can only be done by people of the same age who grew up as childhood sweethearts! Not a mother who is hundreds of years old! Although it is said that the last thing to worry about in fairy tales is age, if this Aunt Xuan grew up after the protagonist, and spent a long time with each other, and the family relationship turned into love, then it would be acceptable! After all, the main character has grown up and looks like an adult! An adult who is hundreds of years old tells a five or six year old child that I will marry you when you grow up! I get goosebumps just thinking about it! That's the only thing I can't accept, the rest is what I like to watch! Genius character design, crushing combat power! Keep reading until the end! Just talk about it, this is just my personal opinion! Don't mind the author!

5 Points. Except for the fact that the master of Lianxu discussed Gou Dao and then looked shocked at the idea, which is extremely genius and a bit awkward to learn, everything else was pretty good. In terms of evaluation, it has sufficient emotional descriptions that the female author is good at. It is overall warm and warm, but it does not lose the cruel reality of the world of immortality. From the old man selling treasures, to the guardian of Wanjia, to the Tang family's Bu Xianshan, the narrative is full of details and harmonious with the theme. Good luck, author. As a suggestion, the more comprehensive the character's personality and cultivation background are, the better the results will be.

The famous love triangle is solved in this book. What about two women and one man? Two people get married first, have a son, and give it to another woman to play with and raise. 666 Author I like this setting alone, which is already a perfect score. No matter whether the writing is good or not, as long as you are willing to innovate, it is a perfect score for me. Finished reading Yes, it's creative, but the relationship with the parents feels a bit too abrupt and disconnected, but it's fine later on. The author is trying his best to explain. Just follow the author's ideas and read the book.

This part in the middle is a bit unbearable. I'll watch it again if I have the chance. The middle part is really too poisonous! This relationship cannot be repaired! So disappointed!

I remember that after I traveled through the world without any risk, I was very happy and sang a song called "The Blood Song of the Three Realms". I was discovered by the "Lord of the Stars" and took me to the "Journey to the Misty" and entered the "Heavens and Worlds". I met the "God of Killing" known as the "Natural Disaster". He sat on the "Throne of the Divine Seal" and wanted to kill me, but was saved by the "Nine Heavens Sword Demon". After they recovered from their injuries, they said goodbye to me. Later, he recommended me to "The Evil King of Another World", and I did "Underworld Special Forces" in "The Unrivaled Tang Sect". There, "Galaxy Emperor" taught me "Swallowing the Starry Sky", and "Qin Emperor" taught me how to play the piano. I was developing Final Intelligence there, and I had Clairvoyant Eyes. When I have nothing to do, "The Magic Chef of Ice and Fire" teaches me how to cook, and "The God of Bacchus" teaches me how to mix wine. The most awesome thing is "Emperor". His old man taught me "Unparalleled in the World" "Peerless Magical Powers", and I followed the path of "Emperor Supreme". Soon after, I trained the "Immortal" Divine Body. Under the "Heaven Realm and Firmament", I used the "Destroy the Sky Map" to defeat the world's best master "The Evil God" and snatched the "Throne of the End of the Dharma". However, the world could not bear my power and the space was shattered. I was sucked into the "Perfect World" and returned to the "Wild Era" Yuan~~~Oh! I am old, and now it is the world of you young people, but young people, you have to update!

Everyone has a problem with being wary of the male protagonist, but the male protagonist is really reincarnated. In other words, he is no longer powerful. If he is, wouldn't it really be possible for him to be imprisoned? The male protagonist didn't say that he was reincarnated, but he was already wary. The current situation is that the male protagonist trusts his parents very much, but he did not expect that his parents have been observing him. I hope I can keep writing, it looks good so far

Regarding the family plot, I hope the author will give you a good ending. Although the author is right, I feel that readers would prefer to see your relationship before you write Chapter 12.

Recommend! In the category of cultivating immortals, parents provide resources. When you are at a low level, you don't have to go out, and when you are at a low level, you don't have to go outside to experience anything! The early plot is also very well arranged, and it will not be boring to watch. Whether it will become a good novel depends on how the author writes later, or whether the author can be a eunuch. One of the author's views that I like the most is how can those big forces and big families harm their own geniuses? How can the kind of harm to their own geniuses be passed down for thousands, tens of thousands, or hundreds of thousands of years!

It's a plain story about cultivating immortality. The author's writing is good and the plot design is also good. But too many people complained about the previous parents plot. In fact, I feel that the male protagonist's approach is the right one. Too many people can't accept that the plot about the parents has such a low rating, but you can really watch it.