Reshape the Laws and Rule the Universe’s New Era

When I saw Chapter 9, I felt weird, a bit like a foreign language computer translation, or AI expansion. It is not like the usual spoken language, but it is not formal enough. Here are a few examples. "He finally calmed down. Now that he's calm, he's finally able to search more effectively." "Maine stayed behind to carefully collect the robes while making sure he didn't mess up. It was pretty difficult, but not as hard as the ones he had to overcome to join the team. He can't mess up anything now." "You stay here. The armored trucks will be here soon. Stay here and look for anything we may have missed. Every item is important, no matter how big or small. You are also responsible for bringing the bodies back to our base. We need them to understand how they died." "We asked as many people as possible" For example, in the above examples, some passages with the same meaning are repeated expressions, and there are many third-person descriptions similar to "This should be...", And in the last sentence, we usually say that we asked many people, rather than "asked as many people as possible." "As many as possible" looks a bit like English grammar. Coupled with the author's update speed, it is very doubtful that it was machine-translated and proofread or the outline was written and expanded by AI.

Come on, author, come on! It feels like translating a foreign novel

The subject matter and plot are well written, but there is a common problem between books written by the author and other unpopular books. They write a lot of text without dividing it into paragraphs. Online novels are different from physical books. The screen is small, and a large paragraph of text takes up the entire screen. It looks very tiring. If you lose your focus, you will not know which line to read, and you have to read it again.

Although I have only read a few of them, I do feel that the writing is quite good. I feel sympathy and sadness for the protagonist's pain of losing his parents.

It is really well written. The author can customize the cover and change some sensitive words. Your cover must be homemade. You can find someone to do it for you. It can become popular. And some paragraphs are too big. You can write one sentence and leave one line blank. If you really want to write one sentence, leave one line blank. It can improve the reading experience. I think it's pretty good. It has good writing skills and IQ, but you have to write one sentence with one line blank. The cover costs five yuan to customize. When you open a new book, write less sensitive words. The cover really has too much influence. Many people won't click on it. I must remember it next time I open a new book. My friend can get 150 a day for a month when he just writes. His writing is not half as good as yours. I really think your writing is very good. My friends have just written books. 88,000 Views, Jianyi, please change your writer account, and then customize the cover, write a blank line, don't be popular with me c

The overall logic and rhythm are good, and the quantity is huge! Can recommend

It is indeed a very good book. I think the reason for being restricted is because the names of the characters in your game are relatively sensitive. That means you have to replace the word criminal with something else. Tomato will limit the flow of such criminals if they appear multiple times. If you replace this sensitive word with other words, the flow will not be restricted. Overall it's a really good piece of work, I dare say. These sensitive words have been modified. This work should be read by millions of people.

Come on come on! A masterpiece! A very novel plot, no abuse of the protagonist, no nonsense. Full of useful information, I highly recommend taking a look.

It's very good, the future is promising, and it has the potential to be a masterpiece.

Although it's not to my taste, it's okay [note][note][note]