Veiled Visage

Luo Xiaoyi, who burns like a flame, brings warmth and enthusiasm to the people around him; the water wind that tolerates all things, although the author writes about Kai Feng's glib side, this is also a variety of water; the down-to-earth and steady Ziyao is earth, the strongest thing; he can correct the mistakes he has made and understand himself. The blue sky painting in one's heart is a kind of tree heading towards new life; you have to get closer to observe it to feel the warm white light, just like the light can only feel its temperature when you get closer; corresponding to the metal's oriental end, it sharply excludes everyone, but he can thoroughly understand what he should have and what he should do

I really like it, and my main one also eats Yinuo. The secret love in the early days would sometimes make me sad because he didn't know me well, and sometimes I would feel happy because of his inadvertent actions. Sour and sweet, sweet and sour, very suitable for girlhood. That kind of feeling towards the opposite sex or towards the person you admire. All in all, it looks great! ! !

It's quite good-looking. I think it should be rated 6.8. There aren't many private settings. The writing is pretty good. There aren't many OOC situations. It doesn't break down the CP. It's sweet. Don't worry, there are Ziyao and Shaman. The first part is well written, but the later timeline jumps a bit too fast. It starts from the chapter where the painting is not separated at the end. It's too fast. If CP adds a sister to Ziyao, Yao cautions. This is a daily campus article, and there is no major main line. The most important line should be the family affairs between Luo Cheng and Bainuo. In the front, Luo Cheng (privately) has feelings for Bainuo, but it will be fine later. The last one is CP, don't worry, they are all there, but because of the setting of this book, there are fewer Yifeng and Mo Yi, and there are Nuo Hua, and the remaining three pairs (Mo Hua, Nuo Yi, Fengman) are all there. But in 25 years, there are still people who write fan fiction for Dou Long so seriously. Regardless of whether the content is good or bad, the author deserves five stars because of his sincerity. The above are all objective evaluations, and there is no hard praise or criticism. By the way, let me remind the teachers that Tianhua and Ziyu were childhood sweethearts in the book, but in the end Ziyu still got cancer. Then there is my personal experience. I feel that Bailuo and Tianhua love to cry too much. In the main drama of Fighting Dragon Warriors, Tianhua seemed to cry 2 to 3 times, while Bailuo only cried once. There were too many tears in this movie, which is a bit unlike their characters.

The author writes very well. He loves to draw attention to Dongfang Mo and Lan Tian paintings.

This is the best book about dragon fighting and humanities on campus that I have ever read. The content is rich, the characters are full of sincere emotions, and it also shows the youthful vitality of the student days. Of course, every character in the teacher's works has an unfortunate experience, such as Bailuo's tragic childhood misfortune, the childhood shadow left by her cousin who bullied her since she was a child, and the subsequent reformation of her cousin. Although Dongfang Mo is a child of a wealthy generation, he has his own ideas, but his parents want him to inherit their career, as if his life has always been controlled by others and cannot make his own decisions. I was also deeply inspired by the teacher's works, and I also learned about my own experiences that I had never experienced before. I have to say that the teacher's writing style is very good. I hope you will continue to shine in the future. I don't know if the teacher will create another work, but I will always support the teacher

If the plot of this book were placed in the entire circle of dragon fighting, I think it would still be very exciting. I think this book. It is mainly written around Bainuo's family. Bainuo's cousin Baijie (the author's private design) was relatively extreme in the early stage, but he was not simply bad. He also had his own unspeakable aspects (each of the author's private design has his own experience) [Send Heart] [Send Heart], each person is described in a very detailed and vivid way. Everyone's emotional lines also have twists and turns. , [Shy] [Shy] What I like the most is Yi Nuo. Many of the personal settings are used to advance Yi Nuo's story line [laugh] [laugh]. Although Kaiman's emotional line is less, they are the most stable couple (probably) [Thinking] [Thinking], in the final painting process, there is a little more pen and ink, but in fact everyone is It's the protagonist (what the author said) [like] [like], I feel this too, but it's hard to write it all because of the age difference between us (compared to everyone else, after all, Ziyao's scenes are a bit pitiful [face covering] [face covering]) Whether it's Luo Xiaoyi or the others, or the author's personal setting, there is a good ending. Very complete! [Love][Love] also makes me very happy! Overall, it's very beautiful. You don't need to worry too much and just close your eyes and watch! [Understood][Understood] Those who were dissatisfied with Cousin Luo Xiaoyi (Luocheng) and Cousin Bainuo (Baijie) were relieved after seeing it. Everyone has their own difficulties, so don't stop watching just because of this! [Salute][Salute] The extra episode is also very sweet and not OOC at all. Please be patient and watch for more plot content! The author spent a lot of effort! [Love][Love] I also admire the author's perseverance very much [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] has been updating, and now it is completely finished, and I am filled with emotions! I have read it three times and this book has left a deep impression on my mind! Although Dou Long is not a good official, I am really happy to have such a heart-warming fan novel. [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] Finally, I wish the author all the best and all his wishes come true!

From Old Ford to 🍅, it's a great book! I like everyone's characters so much

I really want to see Luo Xiaoyi and Baino [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I originally wanted to give it five stars, but my only dissatisfaction was that it felt like the ending was inexplicable. Baijie and Ou Mei were not together in the end, and there was no final scene, including Yinuo's wedding. There was a feeling that you were still waiting for the next chapter to be updated, and it would tell you it was over at a glance. In addition to these, the characters' stories, personalities, and emotional lines are all very good.

It's so beautiful. I'm stumped at the end of the painting.