Reincarnated as a Spirit, I Became a Female Rival

It's good to watch, and the rare thing is that the writing is good, and the plot is not laggy. Even though she is a boy-to-female, the heroine has an online IQ and is very good-looking. Even if some people like the heroine, it is because of the shining point of the heroine's character, the fighting is wonderful, and she can also establish a spiritual bond with the elves. If I don't write random CPs in the future and keep updating, I will keep chasing it, come on ^0＾~

Overall it is good. The biggest shortcoming is the continuity of the plot and the small poisonous points. Although there are not many small poisonous points, they are poisonous in key places every time, which makes people uncomfortable to watch. Personally, the first poisonous point that I feel is not a poisonous point is the two souls in one body. The second poisonous point is the spiritual root poisonous point in the origin chapter. The three spiritual roots of water, fire and gold that the author gave to the heroine look really awkward, because one spiritual root corresponds to an elf. What about the fourth one? There are also the fifth and sixth elves in the back. What if they have that spiritual root? So it is better to give the heroine a six spiritual root or a chaotic spiritual root from the beginning. Not only will it be comfortable for the readers, but the heroine's talent can also be recognized. I won't talk about the other little poisonous points. It's not that I didn't find them or I didn't make them up, but I don't know how to describe those poisonous points, because they are just the poisonous points that I think, so I will only talk about these two poisonous points, because these two poisonous points are the poisonous points that most readers think. Okay, I will say these. Finally, I would like to give you a few words. I hope the author will write this book better and better [Like]

It's a really great Pokémon novel. The world is original, not the cliche Pokémon on Earth kind, and the author has laid a lot of foreshadowings, and the plot connection is not bad. There should be an outline of the author, but the age seems a bit strange, and the most important thing is that the protagonist is not a traditional Pokémon king.

In my opinion, it is a good Pokémon novel, but Lily in the middle is a bit unsatisfactory, with too little foreshadowing. I fell in love with it inexplicably, and after reading the second volume, it felt very depressing. The second volume was a bit too disturbing. It can be seen that I wanted to write some details to highlight the sense of separation of the protagonist, but the overall story is very compact. And I am personally very curious about who Gao Ranran likes? Do you like Xiao Yu, Xu Yu, or Xu Yu who is influenced by Xiao Yu? And Gao Ranran's actions also look a bit uncomfortable, and some paragraphs seem to be taking advantage of others' danger. I haven't read the third volume yet, but I can tell it's a depressing story, which makes me feel a little uncomfortable. I'll read the rest slowly before continuing to evaluate. So far, it seems pretty good to me. Overall, this novel is not suitable for someone like me who reads books with a leisurely attitude. The author likes to foreshadow, which makes the story line very tight and intertwined, which makes it very depressing and leaves little time to breathe. I will review the rest after reading the third volume. Generally speaking, it is good.

This article is really good. Both Pokémon and gender change are well written. Pokémon battles feel very similar to daily life. The strengthening of the power of bonds makes every battle very exciting. However, the protagonist jumps a few levels and fights too many times. In terms of gender change, it can be said that it is the most classic straight male transformation in gender change stories. Women, no matter how cute they are, stick to their true feelings and not be affected by female thinking. This kind of writing is very contrasting and not easy to read. It can be said to be my favorite type of sexual transformation. There are very few sexual transformation articles nowadays like this. They all fall quickly and there is no desire to continue reading. I suddenly thought about reading Pokémon articles, but I found such a beautiful sexual article😋

The author's writing is good, although some of the logic in the front is not good, but the grasp of the plot is still good! Especially when writing about Menas, it takes more pen and ink than writing about Charmander, but Charmander's emotional bond is deeper.

I have only watched most of the content, and have not continued to watch the rest, but I really want to make some suggestions after watching it. The overall content is not bad, but there are many points that make me personally feel uncomfortable. First, there are many times of frustration, and there are not many points that can really make people happy. Second, I personally think that the part of Menas should appear in the extras instead of the main text, and that part of the plot makes me feel the most uncomfortable. I don't care about the feelings of the protagonist at all, and I have been forcefully accepting it. To be honest, I really feel that this paragraph should not appear in the text. I hope that this part of the emotion can be corrected later, or someone can be arranged to be the opposite of Menas to protect the protagonist. There should also be more interaction between the protagonist and other elves. I don't know how the gap between Xiao Yu and the protagonist will be resolved in the future. Finally, give the protagonist more highlight moments.

It's really super good-looking, but when I saw the part about traveling through ancient times, I really couldn't stand it anymore. I skipped it directly, and then the plot jumped too much and I couldn't understand it. I had to run away. QAQ, but this is really the best Pokémon story I've ever read. I didn't just watch it for 31 minutes. I don't know why, because the offline time in school does not count. Just reading this novel, I have waited four times for the 90-minute waiting time.

Although there are slight flaws in the processing of soul travel, and the blur of the little girl's awakening, it seems that it is deliberately trying to fill in the holes, but the innovation of Pokémon is very novel, and I hope more people will see this work. The scenery environment and scene transitions are very vivid.

There are not many good-looking Pokémon stories, and even fewer good-looking Pokémon heroine stories (sexual transformation). Come on, the author, the five-star structure is simple and reasonable. The main character's name is nice, and the writing can be seen to be simple and smooth. Be bold in your imagination and be creative.