My Little Pony: I Am a Master Strategist

It looks good, but I feel that the protagonist is just like the minions. Whichever villain he joins, that villain will definitely fail, even though he will fail in the first place [you taste it carefully] [smirk] [you taste it carefully]

It's pretty good, especially about the protagonist, I think it can be called "The Demon Lord's My Little Pony Comes Home"

This novel is so novel, it is exactly like the novel, and the content is very relevant to the novel. I can't imagine it at all! The novelist is really just a novelist! (No malice, just a new twist) [laughing evilly] This pony fanfic is too ponyy and fanfic! !

To be honest, I really enjoyed reading this book. I didn't skip a chapter from the first to the last chapter. What made me happy was when I learned that it didn't have a heroine (in fact, even if there was a heroine, I would continue reading it as if there was no heroine). Every time I saw the failure of the protagonist and the reasons for the failure, I felt funny and sad. I also like Moonlight, but Moonlight basically has no role at the end. Furthermore, when I saw that Lao Hai did all this just to go home, Not to mention how sad it was, then I saw the ending. Moonlight ended up being left in Equestria (or the United States?). Beihai ended up looking like she was going home, but I don't know whether she went home or not, but I knew that Moonlight would never see her beloved father again. I have read the author's other works before, such as "My Little Mary is a Little Dark," but this is the best of the author's works in my opinion (and I think it is the best My Little Pony-themed work I have ever seen). Ratings do not mean everything. What is important is that you think it is good. I hope the author will continue to create. I really hope that I can see your works on the recommendation page many years later. I will continue to read your other works. Come on, author! [Blowing kiss]

Now that we all have daughters, will there be a heroine in the future? [Thinking] The setting of the protagonist is a bit confusing. At first, I thought it was a time traveler, but I didn't feel like it after reading the middle part. I was sure after watching the back part. There is also a slight problem with the outline. Why do the protagonists in time travel novels written in the 1990s and above always want to go home? Of course it's just my own feeling, after all, there are too many of the same type. After all, it has the theme of going home and adheres to the background of thousands of years. It will be a little difficult to change later: the heroine can be arranged and the daughter can express herself more. What do you say about asking the male protagonist to stay? In anime terms, it means bonding, which is also emotion. If you insist on not winning once in a thousand years, you can set up some difficulties later. When the protagonist is most helpless and confused, using the daughter or heroine can make the hero know how to cherish the present and rewrite the outline. The male protagonist can stick to the goal of going home with his daughter and the female protagonist, or he can cherish the present moment, and then go to other universes later. After all, even if he gains the power to travel across the universe, there are so many universes that he does not know the coordinates and it is impossible to return to the original universe at once. After all, Jia Xu, a poisoner, also has his own lover and family. There is a bug in it, which is that Discord can cut through dimensional walls and go directly to other universes. This can be weakened a little. The above is a slightly newer subject matter that I have read so many books on. But it's just a general direction and personal suggestions, and the author's process is a bit fast. I finished the whole season in a dozen chapters. OK, brothers, just take a look. New authors can also refer to it. After all, I am not an author. I can only give you some suggestions, or if you have your own ideas, you can write according to your own ideas.

Holy shit, I just realized that "My Little Pony is a Little Dark" turns out to be by the same author. I said the writing style looks so similar (I hope the author's writing style can be improved a bit. I struggled to read both books [face covering], but they are both excellent) (But can you add some black and lesbian elements to this book?)

I have a little question, why is the highest-level title Xiaonan Niang?

You don't want to have no female protagonist, you can have a single female protagonist, but it's better to have more female protagonists.

Originally I just wanted to pick some chapters to read this book. After all, I finally found the My Little Pony book, but I picked a few chapters and became fascinated by it. It was really comfortable to read. The goal of the protagonist has never changed, and the story is very exciting. To be honest, when I was watching it, I sometimes thought that the protagonist should just stay in the world of My Little Pony. Anyway, I am familiar with the protagonist, and the world of My Little Pony is still a utopian ideal world. But when I saw that the protagonist was actually a prophet who lived before Equestria was created, I felt that the protagonist's will was very strong. Some people are obsessed with immortality and some people hate immortality. I am not qualified to help him make a decision, let alone evaluate it. Maybe as the protagonist said, if there is no system, he may stay in the My Little Pony world, but when the protagonist knows that he can go home, there is no second choice. Home is such an unattainable dream for those who are far away from home.

The plot is not draggy, the pace is quite good, the plot style is like the cartoons of the past, and it is fun to watch. The only problem is that the sentences are not fluent and it is a bit difficult to read. The plot is really interesting, at least it's very thoughtful, much better than some books