Dragon Raja: Starting with the Awakening of Word Spirit: Emperor

The part where the protagonist and Eri elope is very well written. I have seen an author with the best descriptions in fan fiction. The style is very Jiangnan and the content is very rich. I don't know what the follow-up will be, but I am willing to give you five stars for these few pictures.

This book is really good to read. The characters are all flesh and blood. They can cry, laugh, or feel sad. Especially when it describes Sun Wukong fighting hundreds of rounds for Lu Bu and Diao Chan. But Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou with an outer ring and a Noxian guillotine, this wave of M46 will kill him if he sweeps his head. Apart from that, I compare I particularly appreciate what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys knocking him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowing of the fighting scenes that make you feel like you are actually there, and the character description is very good!

It's a decent fanfic, and the protagonist's character is also very likable. The only thing I'm a little dissatisfied with is that Chu Zihang's knife shouldn't be given to the protagonist so easily. Well, after all, the knife is related to his father. Even if it is borrowed, there should be some small stories interspersed in the middle clips.

The introduction is messy, but the writing style is very good and the quality is maintained. This is also the only good Dragon Clan fanfic I have read on Tomato. Nothing to say. .

Objective evaluation: It is highly repetitive with the book "Slaying the Dragon Without Money" at point q, and the overall plot advances too fast. Personal evaluation: Although it is repetitive, it handles personal emotions and social relationships better than that book. The male protagonist of this book is not as shocking as the sister in that book, nor is it as shocking as the senior sister in that book. The author was very wise in not writing too many scenes about the senior sister in the early stage.

Five stars, five stars. I can only say that the characters are very well-written, Angers's few words of invitation are also very touching, and those wild metaphors are very Jiangnan characteristics. The most important thing is that the protagonist is cold and so handsome, [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration] Oh, it's a pity that it's not the harem, it's so uncomfortable [I'm about to cry]

It looks good, not much of it is about scoring points, but can anyone tell me what pressure points mean. In addition, the writing style is really good. Although it is a systematic article, the writing style really feels like watching Long San. Overall it is good, the writing style is very delicate, and the foreshadowing is also perfect. I hope the quality can be maintained in the future. Finally, come on, the author!

Although I haven't watched Dragons, I feel that the author's writing is really good, but there is a female protagonist (personal preference, single male protagonist). But it doesn't matter. I will recommend it to my friends and netizens who like Dragon Clan. I hope you can get better and better at your books. More people came to see it. Goodbye, I will recommend it to my friends. [Laughing][Learned]

The writing style of this Dragon Clan fan is excellent, like a spiritual spring that nourishes the heart. At the moment of Yan Ling's awakening, "The deep blue eyes are full of ancient power, and the incantation is about to shake the world. The majestic waves are rushing into the sky, and the king of heaven and earth is coming." The sharpness of the writing shows its mystery and vastness, making us feel like we are in it. The outline of the characters is penetrating. The protagonist is brave and courageous, "his body is like a pine tree that is proud of the wind and rain, and his eyes are like stars fighting in the sky." His shape is vivid on the paper. Various characters also show their talents, and their souls are fresh and within reach. The plot is laid out like a symphony, with a degree of relaxation. In the place of fierce battle, "the swords clash and the lotus blooms with blood, and the dragon roars across the abyss of the universe." It is exciting; in leisure time, "the laughter in the warm sun yard is endless, and the secret words whisper the friendship." It is like a spring that refreshes the heart. Expressive feelings, delicate and graceful. When love begins, "My eyes are filled with shyness, and my heart is full of love." Friendships are deep, "Join hands on a dangerous journey, and warmth remains, and we work together in the same boat with determination." They are all poetic and touching. Great support, author. I like this book very much. You have outlined a new chapter of the Dragon Clan with your pen, and your words shine like stars. The scenery depicted reaches straight into the sky, and the characters created have endless charm. May you continue to sail on the road of creation, let the fragrance of ink flow forever, and continue to write more magnificent legends.

The writing is very tasteful, and the plot is not too confusing. I can see that I really want to write the taste of Jiangnan, and it is indeed good, but sometimes some of the metaphors are a bit too imitative. The metaphors of Jiangnan's writing are often very deep, so it will be rich in philosophy. Come on, this Dragon Clan fanfic is the best I have ever seen.