The Invincible Sword Immortal and the Gentle Girl: Honkai: Star Rail Arc

Can you write less extras? Are there too many extras?

Give me a five-star support

As a Bentie player, this is the best second creation I have ever seen. It just feels like Liuying's favorability has increased too quickly. Is it the protagonist's halo? I don't know if I will become an immortal in the future.

Very good very good

Good-looking, love to watch, like to watch

It's so beautiful, even I, the Liuying Chef, got stuck in it and couldn't get out.

You can add some remarks in some places, otherwise it will be easy for people to misunderstand. The text is okay, the logic is stronger, and the writing should be better if it is combined with the performance in the plot.٩۹(๑•̀ω•́ ๑)۶

In response to his request, he sent down five-star blessings

Good looking. Love to see more.

It's pretty enough. Hehe, continue to write the story of breakup and reconciliation. I enjoyed watching it. Quite interested too. Keep writing. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]